Suitable ending.

steal emma! adopt the slytherin-puff!

please make Harry her maid of honor at her wedding lmao PLEEEEASSEEEEEE

I'm not sure why I get some underlining feelings of the relationship turning into Fleur/Harry/Hermione. I suppose that is just how thin the line can be sometimes where you care for another person as much as they do.
I will say I completely disagree with people who don't like when the focus isn't on Harry completely. It makes it all feel more alive. This small family he has formed for himself is incredibly sweet and I can't wait to read more.

Hello,

I like your story, it is a new take on the Harry / Fleur stories.
I just have one comment.
Voldemort in french does not mean flight from death. I know it is used as such in many fanfictions and i do not know where it comes from, but I am french, and vol de mort means Flight OF death which is more in accordance with Voldemort/Tom riddle's character and explains he fear the name can induce in the series.

Best regards,

great story look forward the next chapters

I know I am just nitpicking but I will do it nonetheless. The rescue in flying car happened in year two because Dobby's trap was what made Harry being held prisonner in his room. In four year the Weasleys came to get Harry for the Cup but go through the chemney (the Dursley's was temporally added to the network) but it was a fake one so they ended trappes in it and blew it up to get out.

I hope this wasn't the end. This is a great story and I need closure

Honestly, this battle came out of no where with no warning. It felt rushed and ill planned. The winning part of this story, so far, is the relationship that you built between Harry and Fleur. That was done well. So, Sirius has one arm on the ground. Do you plan to have it re-attached? What is going on in the Department of Mysteries? Dumbledore is hit, but not by a flash of green. So, this doesn't appear to be the final battle, yet.

Again, going off script. When did Frank and Alice Longbottom die? Why would they be beyond the veil? You've not rationalized this or made it part of the storyline cannon of this with the exception of an odd bit in this chapter which doesn't mesh or make any sense. Hell, Neville has been non-existent in this story, so far. And, not for nothing, but in the graveyard scene Nagini was clearly housing a horcrux when she passed. So, I'm just disappointed in what is going on in these last few chapters.

OK, you kinda lost me in this chapter with Harry getting visions and issues with his scar. Since he died in the graveyard, he really shouldn't have a horcrux in him any longer, and this isn't making sense to me. Just being honest.

It could’ve been literally anything other than a ring. Rings are so over done.

Hmm having a conversation where Harry explains how he had no idea anyone would actually read the letter would be absolutely hilarious. The times you actually try with the comedy give me a stich or 2. Even the one liners sometimes gets a snort.

Wow the writing is a lot better now. It could literally be a different person writing(it’s a joke). You’re doing a good job on interactions. Sometimes it still sounds a tad stiff but it’s not really that bad.

Um the killing curse should have destroyed the horrocrux. That part of the prophecy is already obsolete.