Reviews for The Lonely Letters |
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Arnie1701 chapter 4 . 1/25/2018 OH MY GOD. Fleur is DEVIOUS. :) Not only did she out-smart the Dumbles but she solved Harry's "Of Age" problem; as well! She also solved his problem of getting a date for the Yule Ball, too! The fact that he's now married, basically of age also means he's free from the Dursleys. Though I bet there will be a ton of fallout from the Hogwarts students when they find out Harry and Fleur are off the market. Sirius? He'd be howling with laughter and say that Fleur would have been a perfect Marauder! |
Aaron Leach chapter 4 . 1/25/2018 Awesome chapter! |
EmperorKhan chapter 4 . 1/25/2018 LOL, I just binge-read the last three chapters and BRILLIANT. Moody was right, Fleur pulled a fast one on all of them! That's bloody Slytherin of her, hehehe. |
Arnie1701 chapter 3 . 1/25/2018 I think Harry just found Mrs. Potter, LOL. Interesting take on bonding, too. Imagine the shock on Beauxbatons and Hogwarts girls when they find out that Harry is already taken by...FLEUR. |
Fredek chapter 3 . 1/25/2018 Hey! Another chapter so soon, it's great, too bad it's the end of what's written already. I really enjoyed reading it, even though I still think you could have made this year to be 2-3 chapters long. A little suggestion of what I would love to see, though remember to never forcefully add anything that doesn't flow with you - letters between H and F that we see are only about his brushes with death; how about fitting in a letter or two when they speak about mundane things, like Harry winning a quidditch match or Fleur finding a very obscure or interesting spell. While I realise those things happen in the background, it would be nice to see it done in the story. Although it may be too late now, still, you could have them mention previous letters while talking face-to-face. Other than that, while reading the chapter, I was very curious if you remembered about the time zones, it was very pleasing to see you did. I am curious to learn what the ritual they've attempted was and what will come of it. Hopefully next chapter they will meet, that should be nice to read too! Love your work so far, thanks for publishing! F. |
Aaron Leach chapter 3 . 1/25/2018 Awesome chapter |
Gime'SS chapter 3 . 1/25/2018 thanks for the update |
Fredek chapter 2 . 1/25/2018 Hey there! Fantastic work so far. I "identify" as romantic as well, Fleur/Harry is one of my favourite parings and I hope that you will finish the story. The only complaint I have is that you seem to rush through the story a bit too fast. I understand that you want to get to the romance appropriate time asap, but I think you could do with a bit more content. It could be me trying to get more out of you, but I don't mind being greedy. Keep up the good work, F. |
EmperorKhan chapter 2 . 1/25/2018 Nice touch on Fleur's reaction to Aunt Marge, LOL. I am definitely loving this! |
Arnie1701 chapter 2 . 1/25/2018 Oh, Fleur is definitely crushing on Harry if she's already thinking about babies, LOL. Fleur's reaction to the Basilisk, hehe. Harry should definitely visit Fleur in France. |
Aaron Leach chapter 2 . 1/25/2018 Awesome chapter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 This story is promising! I like how you had Harry and Fleur meet. Please continue! |
Twinklestabber chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Interesting start keep it up. |
The Eternal Warrior chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 I love Harry/Fleur stories! :) |
EmperorKhan chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 This is really good. Glad that Harry met Fleur early rather then waiting until Fourth Year. |