Reviews for Path of the King |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know its already over but it would be dope if nami learned a form of haki or something too instead of just navigation and a weather staff |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great story you should 10000000% make a sequel The use of a different devil fruit was really cool |
![]() ![]() Among all fanfic about Luffy with different devil fruit, yours are the best! I'm so proud of you because you didn't just change the devil fruit, you also worked hard to connect all those canon events in One Piece and did some changes. Not only that, you also shortened the stories which amazed me! So keep the hard work! Thanks for doing this fanfic. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() man fucking dropped this shit story, all those holding back for no fucking reason |
![]() ![]() yes sequal now n0w n0wwww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf nothing fucking change the same as cannon dropped DROPPED |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get it... Luffy's a logia, what does it matter if Arlong cuts him in half? Why did Arlong's teeth hurt him in the first place? He's WATER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If I may ask... Why did Luffy not simply knock them all out? |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA... Luffy vs Crocoboy would be such an unfair fight... Though I am NOT a fan of Mizu Mizu no Mi stories, that is a fundimental breaking of the core rule of the world. Devil Fruits and Water do not mix. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For a seaquel write the new world saga and have Luffy form his Grand Fleet but with way more people and have Luffy save Hancock somehow and Hancock falls in love in him and they join the fleet like that and you could have him go up against Big Mom and Kaido with his new Grand Fleet and stuff like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait so... during the Arlong fight, Luffy held back so much that his powers that he contained at the time cane back exploding all at once!? He needs to train “full force” to control if!? The easiest solution is to not hold back... so stupid. The author made him so strong but he’s just going to hold himself back so that there can actually be a fight? Another easy solution... just toy with the enemy the whole time before finishing them off. Also, how the hell did he get bitten by Arlong if he is made of water!? At first, I liked how fast paced the story was because those were like the prologue so to say.. before the real story begins but when the actual story begins and it’s still fast paced like that, it’s kind of hard to enjoy because everything is just so shallow... literally, everything that happens is always just “ok...” *insert Saitama’s face* |
![]() ![]() ![]() isn't the voice of all things inherited? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh while I like this story you really make it seem like it's leading up to a yaoi pairing between Luffy an Zoro an that's just not right as if those two are going to be with anybody it would be Nami an Robin or nobody at all since honestly it seems like it's heading for the no pairings until the very end if at all in canon kinda like how Fairy Tail ended up with everyone being friend zoned in the end |
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![]() ![]() El fanfic mas estupido que existe |