Oh... I just love EVERYTHING about this fic! I really do! It's just fantastic. I also find it interesting to read different people's portrayals of Magus' minions, and of course of Magus himself. I could go on and on about how beautifully written I consider this to be, but you know that already!

I really like the way this story is turning out. I hope you write more soon. It's interesting. And I love your take on Flea.

It's hard to find stories on this site that are as eloquently written as this one. I was stunned by the quality of this story. Your style is very distinct and you have a well-developed vocabulary (you'd be surprised by how few people can correctly use the word 'stoic'), as well as a great handle on metaphor. I enjoyed this. You should keep writing, because you have a great deal of skill.

i love the way you portray the characters, especially slash... when writing about magus, one can always think about a vincent valentine sort of dude... (that's how i look at it, anyway) but i would assume slash would be the strong, silent type as well... i haven't played CT in a long time though. :frowns: i've been trying to get through valkyrie profile. kk... so write more soon, please. :) the story's beautiful.

beautiful story so far... i love magus... always thought he should fall in love with someone even though he had that pissy, sephiroth thing going on... (not that i don't like sephiroth, that wonderful silver-haired bad-ass...) so please write on!

I like the quotes you have at the start of your chapters - they set the scene very well. Corrine is so SAD! Sniff... well, write more! Once again, this is a great fic!

Hee hee... no suicidal virgins for Magus, thank you very much. Flea is so scary! Magus is so very much in character! (My version of him isn't - you may have noticed.) I love the way you write! It's just... fantastic!

Poor Corrine... this is an excellent story. What happens next? Post more! Please?

Hee hee... Flea is funny (and scary). Wow. I'm intrigued. Very well-written.

Wow. I think there were tears in my eyes... you write beautifully, with such emotion; a moving fic that definitely shows the side of Magus that we never see. Well done.