Author: Thank you for sharing your stories. Sorry RL broke your progress, but RL pays the bills, so it makes sense to set your priorities to it. I hope you find your way to keep writing.

Good one. Thank you.

Found this gem, and you did harry right my guy, he stood up for himself!
Also glad snape is sane enough to realize his hate for harry isn't necessary since there alike or so. Glad to find this

Harry abandoning Theo because of imaginary "racism" is an incredibly dumb move. I refuse to continue to read this garbage story.

Your Harry is a boring arrogant cunt. Making him fight so called "bigotry" in Slytherin is one of the most idiotic tropes in fanfiction. You are writing an adventure story, not a pamphlet about imaginary politics.

Why would Harry introduce himself to the Big Drunk Oaf all of a sudden? Outside of "plot reasons".

I am glad, though, that you didn't make him befriend the weasel.

Granger is extremely annoying.

Also, why would "smarter", "independent" Harry go back to abusive Dursleys instead of renting a room at a hotel?

Wish this story comes back soon

i hope you decide to continue this story, while I'm not the biggest fan of weasleys and really dont like dumbledore I'll admit you did very well on changing then into what they should have been like in cannon compared to how they came across in it

Lorenzo Avogadro is the Italian physicist who came up with the Law and the Number that bear his name. Related?

i don't like how unimpressive harry is, or how much more impressive everyone them

This is a really great story so far. I'm hoping to see more of it at some point.

honestly, this is one of the most satisfying first chapters I've read in a long time, probably comparable to the first time I've read a gamer fic

how the hell would grant have such a low vult number

why would the grangers need or ave a vault