Reviews for The Raikou Queen
SanSanna.67 chapter 1 . 10/12
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A ragged cheer went up from the crowd, mostly the electric- and plant-types. They looked uncertain, looking more at Denno than at me, and I wondered what that was about. Maybe they were shy. The birds and bugs watched warily, and I sensed I'd have more work to do to win them over.

I'm too curious
Saberas-67 chapter 1 . 10/12
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Obaba skimmed some of the environmental energy the stone had collected—not much, I thought, but she seemed happy. She pinched my cheeks with gnarled hands and made me promise to visit her.

Boring -.-
Misanisonnis.92 chapter 1 . 10/12
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They both looked at me.

What a beautiful piece of literatur.
ShumrumphX74 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"Let Him show Himself then," a noctowl said from up in a tree.

Cool!
Sarra-6 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"I'm listening."

Amazing!
Tayloji-50 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"You took their energy, liar!" I called back.

Are u serious?!
Lrah.13 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"Do you trust Denno?" I asked her.

Are u serious?!
ThmaberX94 chapter 1 . 10/12
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Yellow energy crackled around Denno, and then blue, and they swirled together into a raging teal Dragon Pulse.

Amazing!
Liruto.55 chapter 1 . 10/12
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Denno mega-evolved, growing larger in a burst of yellow light, white wool growing into a mane and on his tail, with carmine gems throughout.

Boring -.-
Onni25 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"Was it? Or were you so bored it wasn't even a thing you could name? So bored it was like a scream building to burst out of you? Humans say, 'fish don't have a word for water', which is horseshit, but you know what they mean."

Amazing!
TriutantannisX46 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"What's your plan, then?"

Cool!
Lseirsei.64 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"We kept the forest safe from evil spirits and dark powers," I heard myself protesting. "My mother said—the Stormlands could have been destroyed many times if not for us! That's why we controlled the stones! It was our right!"

Are u serious?!
Lnisnnis-77 chapter 1 . 10/12
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The stormstone glowed and its power flitted between the other stones, equalizing them. The apricorn trees looked better, shinier, somehow.

I'm too curious
Sassukr-6 chapter 1 . 10/12
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"Hail, elder," I said, trying politeness. "I am Zulia the raikou, and I return from the human lands."

Give me a break :(
Herfby.62 chapter 1 . 10/12
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I dodged Thunderbolts and a Dragon Pulse as Denno ranted, leaping my way up to higher ground. I fired off an Extrasensory at him and caught the edge of the Confuse Ray that followed, and I tumbled off the cliffside into the forest, my vision spinning.

Strange O.o
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