Your story seems to read like a good soap opera. If you wanted it to be less like a soap opera - hmm - I'll have to think about that. It's a fun read though and I have your story listed under my favorites.

Take it easy,

Lisa

say wha-... no BAD Malfoy BAD...? well i guess it's kinda obvious that he wouldn't be very helpful but still... 0.o I've said it before and I'll say it again, poor jess had no idea what she got herself into. I liked the whole thing with Hermione, I love they way they (snape and jess) keep missing eachother yet everyone else they seem to know sees them, Murphy's law i suppose. Lucius is a total prat... but you write him excellently, one of those guys you love to hate kinda thing! I'm eagerly waiting for the next wonderful enstalment! Wonderful job as always!

Later Dayz

no don't tell me that was lucius at the end! well..if it was, not much i could do cuz it your story...o well...anyways...sev&jess r so close!grr...good thing herm was there...yah!or maybe it was a bad thing cuz the guy in sevvie's room now knows where jess is...any ways...another great chap!...update soon! ...later_

Great chapter! Thanks for the update! I hope the next one comes out soon! I can hardly wait! I hope Jessica is okay! Does Severus ever find her?

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~lizzie

Wooho! An update, finally. The suspense is killing me here. You are so evil. You make me wait weeks, then you hit me with another freakin cliffhanger. GET THEM BACK TOGETHER ALREADY! I don't think I can withstand another cliffy blow. Its time to end this silly game of cat and mouse. PLEASE! It had better be next chapter...Or else...Sorry. It seems as though all my reviews turn into death threats. Mood swings, I suppose. I can't wait to read their reunion. Knowing you, its going to be awesome. I am going to kill Lucius myself. He always seems to pop up at the most inoptune times. I hate him. Severus needs to unleash a can of whoop ass on him! Make his death slow and painful, that pervert! Anyway, I think that's all I have to say about this chapter. Hurry with the next posting. Love ya,

Janette

Nice one, although I'm wondering if anything else could *possibly* go wrong with this girl! I really hope that they're going to have a happy ending, hey.

Nice way of bringing Hermione into it. I adore how you write her.

And yeah, good point about the gold. Although I still maintain that I don't think Sevvie would be throwing wizarding gold around, what with the wizarding world not wanting muggles to know who they are, and stuff. But I'll take your word for it. Also, yeah, I understand how he would have been in a hurry, and stuff.

*huggles*

OMG, the angst! just read through the whole fic & absolutely love it. can't wait to see were it goes!

I love this story! please update!

Well, I got the brick wall thing right... but after that.. it all went to pot! lol :O) And at the end.. so close yet so far, these poor kids, so much angst. But I'm happy to see that Tom isn't a lap dog to Lucius! and i'm gonna go out on a limb here and say we haven't seen the last of Mr. Malfoy senior! keep up the great work!

~cheers

darn they'er so close just 1 floor away !...anyways excellent chap!...update soon! ASAP!...well...later_

I noticed you didn't leave a comment for me at the end of this chapter...Did I say something wrong in my last review? I don't recall writing anything mean. Anyways, I just wanted to leave a quick comment, since I read this chapter and all. I'm glad Severus is so close to finding her now. You had some great ideas here. I like that you finally introduced her to Snape's world. I hope they meet again soon.

Oh no! This is very, very tragic.

Okay, so I must admit that I was *slightly* disappointed when this wasn't the *other* fic, but then I realised that I seem to have missed out on a million author alerts, so I got to read heaps of this fic, which made up for it.

Poor Jesse! Poor Sev! Oh, this is *terrible*. She's going to, like, take his bowl at breakfast or something, isn't she? Then all their pain will be over? Pretty please?

I don't get why Severus paid for her rent. It wasn't like she was going to get back there, and he'd already alohamora-ed the lock... plus, didn't he give the muggle dude galleons? I'm confused!

But otherwise.. *squee*! It's great. Write more!

EW! Remus and Sirius sharing women...yuck!LOL. I knew they were close, but I had no idea!LOL. It was a great idea though. Are they bisexual? Just curious. Anyway, great chapter. You hit alot of good points here, and now she's finally thinking straight. Good for her. I'm a little confused about the ending though. I don't understand what happened. She bent over to tie her shoe and someone pushed her? Where exactly was she standing at the time? In the street? On the sidewalk? You said a corner, but that could be anything. I have an idea where this may be going, but I will keep it to myself. I don't want to ruin your surprise if I'm correct in my assumptions. I wonder what Dumbledore has to say about the whole ordeal. I can't wait for his appearance, he makes for a great device Anyways, please continue...

Oh, and I've posted a new chapter...in case you're interested.

falling into a brickwall...ok either someone catches her or she falls and ends up knocked out or somethimg like that...anyways great chap! update asap!K!...later_