I'm amazed how good the story is and the quality never dropped due to how long it was. I hope you could do a SI in this world next with a few twists.

amazing!

Awesome

Did Erik died Offscreen?

The frequent use of modern day words really putting damper to the story, otherwise great chapter.

I think Eric was either 17-18 years old in lore, but game wise he really looks older.

Why the college want to study the Dragonborn, there are hundred of books written about Dragonborn emperors, in game they were happy to have Dragonborn because it will make college popular so that nords and imperials not see magic as evil after the Oblivion crisis.

annnnnnd I can no longer read this story. I am not sure how I managed to get this far into the story. If I were him I would have literally done EVERYTHING opposite of what did. White knight bitch scared to do anything (or anyone), just hopes for the best with everything he does. He is living off of luck. He jumped at the chance to be a werewolf for more power but then turns down chance to become one of the strongest beings their is. Also a Dawnguard SIMP even though he has only met them one time. Harkon should have killed him. Would have been a perfect end to the story.

Good job on writing this, story is put together pretty well. Also idk if you just typed random shit for the dragon language but it looks legit to me. That must have took a bit to get right. Not many can write a story as well as this. Still think your MC is a piece of shit that should have got eaten by vampires though.

I am feeling bad for his housecarls. Especially Lydia. He fucked her once then said that he hoped she didnt remember it and never brought it up again. He ignores all of them. Also I hate white knights with a passion. Only reason I can keep reading this is because of the Serana tag. I hope she can beat some sense into him because he is fucking retarded.

People of Tamriel doesn't swore "O god" but by the Talos or Akatosh.

Marcus didn't get romance, bad in Witcher games we have that satisfaction.

Magicka overuse never cause fatigue like chakra use in Naruto.

The shout is Feim not Fye.

Fantastic story.

Why people of Skyrim swearing like modern day?