Reviews for Blue Eyed Lovers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yamato is alive? o.O AU i guess :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() daymnnnnnnnn INOOOOOOOO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the fuck is a Mexican stan!? (this is naruto not some random ass city) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is basically the interesting parts of the relationship. good, good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ummm. not the...best thing to say while screwing like rabbits |
![]() ![]() wtf the plot is not good the main character personality is very bad like a child keep in mind newbie writer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Realmente me gusto mucho tu historia, sinceramente me gusto como juntaste a Naruto y Ino pero me hubiera gustado mas la participación de Sakura de acosadora de Naruto como Shikamaru pero exceptuando eso me gusto tu historia, gracias por este fanfic :3 |
![]() ![]() Wtf you need to go back and rewrite the story I can think of so many things that can be done better what about being a fanfiction cliche and just so you know fanfiction writers like you give real fans a bad name |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Bingo Book Bonus |
![]() ![]() ![]() What sweet chapter this fic has some problems but there some moments all throughout that I've just thoroughly enjoyed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have trouble seeing how the random thugs in this chapter thought picking a fight with Naruto was a good idea cause it's obviously supposed to take with The Last era of Naruto cause all the girls in the village (aside from his friends and Ino for now at least) want his dick so they'd have to of at least heard about Naruto right I guess they just went off the way he looks physically and thought they could take him or something lol yeah right. |
![]() ![]() That was an absolute trash fight scene. Horribly written, trash grammer and run-on sentences that would stretch on forever. English is definitely your second language and you're about 10 years old or retarded. |
![]() ![]() This is an amazing story! Love it! |
![]() ![]() Realmente me hubiera gustado ver más yo esta historia apenas la vi y realmente me encanta se que nadie me leera pero igualmente quiero dar mi opinión donde estés autor de esta historia ojala sigas trayendo consigo felicidad con tus historias esta es la mejor historia naruino realmente me encanta u la guardaré y la recomendarte a alguien de YouTube para que la suba aunque eso sería para compartir esta belleza de arte felicitaciones donde estés gracias por darnos esta bella historia |
![]() ![]() it is good |