Reviews for Sniper
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2018
Fantastic. Can't wait for an update!
Notsae chapter 3 . 3/29/2018
So... is Coil dead? I hope so. Considering her personality, even being a serial killer, I wonder if she'll kill the nine or join them.
Mike chapter 3 . 3/24/2018
I hope this is not the end - a "weird power interaction" is a lame-ish kind of finish. Her hanging herself on a PRT gate would be so much better! ;)
Also, if nine as Nine was not intended - why not to take ten as in Agatha Cristie original? Or did she have a specific victims in mind from the start?
All in all - still not bad (though Coil power was not actually "parallel universes" according to WoG).
ulfark chapter 3 . 3/6/2018
OKay i'm hoping for some tattletale intervention over here. not because i want to see her flex her powers or her humor but just so that Taylor has someone to talk to. the exposition dump is a bit more boring and confusing to read than it has to be. Though that is to be expected with a coil chapter to a certain degree.

Still want you to focus more on describing the scene and actions rather than listing what has happened. i want some actual dialogue instead of vague cryptic notes. yes i loath cryptic notes.

i like the premise though and hope you continue with it.
CybertronDefense chapter 1 . 2/22/2018
Freaking Jhin, always the artist...
Battlesny chapter 3 . 2/18/2018
who said she has no powers?

lol, of course there's a zero percent chance of the intruder killing coup if he goes outside and does what they say. if he goes out there never was an intruder in that timeline.
Asuki -The Infinite Archive chapter 1 . 2/16/2018
seriously... goddamn Virtuoso!? and you say Taylor has no powers?
LordGhostStriker chapter 1 . 2/14/2018
I LOST MY FUCKING SHIT WHEN THOSE FOUR LETTERS "J H I N"! oh my fucking god throat hurt from how hard i yelled that name.
jdboss1 chapter 3 . 2/9/2018
so she kill him?
or was she shot at?

nice updat
Slenderbrine chapter 3 . 2/8/2018
So... if she doesn’t have an "audience"... she essentially gets a really bad Thinker headache? But instead of a mere cramp, it's like a Tinker migraine that can’t be treated with Aspirin? Yeesh.
ultima-owner chapter 3 . 2/8/2018
so coil's dead?
6747 chapter 3 . 2/8/2018
ha knew Coil was the next target :D though it played out in a confusing manner
The romantic insanity chapter 2 . 2/8/2018
And Taylor is a tinker sudo Jack Slash with a rifle
Well I'm waiting for her to one shot Levi-chan.
Mike chapter 1 . 2/3/2018
Looks pretty. Not sure where the author plans to go, but that they actually DO have a plan is a good indication.
DrollerKnight chapter 2 . 2/4/2018
This is really good and I would like more
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