I wish this story will be continued one day

The guest below me could have worded it with less slurs, but it's been around five years

Update the story you damn faggot

holy madness

okkkkkk

okkk

ok

You are updating your other story tho that means you still around but I would be dissapointed if this just left too long but I can understand you busy. Take your time

And it died right where things get interesting... Shame

Very much an above average fanfiction. It steps away from being locked into the original story, and flows based on cascading decisions. I can understand Zero's inability to comprehend something that caused the quarians to lose their homeworld. Something that massive a difference is several degrees removed of incomprehension to what is drilled into that child's mind. The combat scene was definitely unexpected, but interesting. I'd love to see you return to working on this fanfic.

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Good story, louise is pretty retarded in it though.

Please update this story. Legion is one of my favorite characters and there aren't many stories about mechanical beings in general. also this is very well written for how short it currently is. all that said I have to say fuck you for leaving this on such a cliffhanger.

Im imaging Louise seeing ME & just what

I gotta say I love this story has got to be the most familiar of zero fanfic I've seen so far