Reviews for Ones and Zeroes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story a lot, at least in the beginning, I am not a big fan of what happens later in the story because I feel much of what lead up to the HUGE conflict could have been cleared up by just sitting down and talking with each other. Louise assumed too many things about her familiar which that and the fact that she didn't take any initiative in trying to come to some agreement and explaining how her world works in greater detail, lead to the massive misunderstanding with Kirche familiar. Hell, if Louise just asks "What the hell are you?" and then they talked to understand each other it would have cleared a lot of things up maybe Kirche and Tabitha could have been there to help in that situation. Legion, my loveable, naive, asshole you, it is not entirely your fault. What I love about any crossover, especially those that feature my favorite characters, are just the interactions the characters have with each other and that can't really happen if most of them are at odds, that's just my opinion. Ethier way, this is a well-written story that characterizes Legion every well, the best I've read actually and even though it's gonna in a direction I'm not the biggest fan of when it comes to crossovers I'm still interested in what happens next to my favorite waifu and also Louise. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You know this is really good. Please make more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooh I remember reading this when it first came out, I was super hyped that my waifu finally got summoned and I feel that you nailed both characters in this chapter. Hell, you even made me laugh a few times. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just writing it here, so you would know that one more person(me) considers this work awesome. Waiting for updates. I know its slow-paced, but still. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "So you were made by elves... but you hate elves" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Geth...legion, trying to understand the Natives'...magic. Like how the Vex are trying to deal with the Paracausal Forces that they can't Simulate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() [ACCESSING DATALOGS] . . . [DATALOGS LOADED] . {THIS UNIT IS PLEASED WITH THE PROGRESS OF THIS WORK OF FICTION} |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting story. I would like to see where it will go. I don't know anything about familiar of zero, but i like how Legion mess thing up :D. I think it left quite a big trail of bodies since he is using mass effect weaponry against unshielded targets that is quiet efficient. One hit is enough to mess your target quit bad even if unlucky target managed to survive it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have my attention. A geth platform; Legion himself as the 'familiar'. Only one of the programs has been 'enslaved' and is under quarantine. Louise is on the run from the academy and possibly looking for something from the capital... Let's see where you go with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this lol |
![]() ![]() You know, the familiar runes don't actually brainwash anyone, so there is no reason to create a contrived reason to make them "grossly ineffective". That just feels like wank. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see this is back. Legion is the best boi, keep him safe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool I've been waiting for this to be updated forever. The thing we need most in this story is more dialogue. Like this story is severely lacking in that department. Right here is the perfect place to add this, please don't just gloss over the info legion drops on Louise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy this isnt dead. It's really interesting. |