|Reviews for The Messiah|
| AussieSheila chapter 13 . 1/5/2010
I was on the edge of my seat for the whole story. In the last chapter, was it Deacon? And he was thinking about Shiloh? I'm a sucker for happy endings! This story was so easy to picture. Great job!
| unkown chapter 13 . 4/22/2003
Ok, I might have missed him, but was Phlox anywhere in this story?
| Nala chapter 13 . 4/22/2003
You did it. I was really happy that at the end he didn't shoot Deacon :). I liked this story very much. Together with "The Torture Ship" it made a really good story, interesting. I never got bored and there seemed to be a twist in every new chapter. It was really great, I hope to read more of you soon. *Nala*
| Nala chapter 11 . 4/20/2003
Wow, this is getting more interesting with every chapter. I'm curious if Shilo's really going to shoot Deacon.
| coldqueen chapter 11 . 4/20/2003
| coldqueen chapter 3 . 4/14/2003
i love it, cause at first i didn't understand so i read the first story, so now i do!
| Nala chapter 7 . 4/13/2003
Hey, this was good. I'm happy to know what happened in the past (I was wondering in "The Torture Ship, too). It's a really great chapter, please post more soon.*Nala*
| Nala chapter 6 . 4/10/2003
I like it so much! Antoher great chapter. i'm curious how it will go on. *Nala*
| Maraschino chapter 5 . 4/6/2003
It's getting interesting, keep it up
| Nala chapter 4 . 4/3/2003
This is going on so interesting. Please continue soon.
| escape5 chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
hi, it's me again;felicia. i'm so glad that you decided to begin writing this new story.
bye i haven't read it yet but when i do i'll write back.
| HopefulNebula chapter 3 . 3/31/2003
Just ignore my last review. This chapter is the best in terms of grammar. And the plot is wonderful as well!
| HopefulNebula chapter 2 . 3/31/2003
Please let me know if you want any additional help beta-ing. You've done a great job and have improved immensely, but there are still several errors.
| leanne chapter 2 . 3/27/2003
Now its getting exciting...one big typo toward the end "the California started to case" should be "chase". Just distracts from the flow is all. looking forward to more...
| Gotta Love Trip chapter 2 . 3/27/2003
Oh! that was cool! I figured it was the Taso, but I still don't know why they suddenly give a d* about people's comfort... from what I remember they weren't not the nicest people.. or was that a differant story.. there are so many I read.. hm... oh wel.. I'll figure it out!