|Reviews for Jack's POVs: Revelations|
| scifigirl chapter 1 . 3/26/2003
This was really good.
I can imagine Jack doing this and blaming himself. Can't wait to read more from you.
| SamInChicago chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
Just read Jack's POV: Revelation. O,K. they say you should always try to provide constructive criticism and here's mine. I really like the 'But it's a good start and tonight that'll be enough.' line, and think that would have been a lovely line on which to end the story. I might have moved the two last lines up and put them before 'I know this is not the end...'
That said, I really liked it! Love Jack's exchange in his head when he's venting his anger at Daniel for making him be the one to stop Jacob. The 'Who should I have asked, Jack, if not you? Was there anybody in the room you wouldn't have fought tooth and nail had they told Jacob to stop?' and 'Did you want me to burden someone else with that choice?' are exectly what I can imagine running through Jack's head as he desperately tries to work through his mixed feelings.
Very nice. Eager to read the rest of the series as you write it.