Reviews for Endless Pantheon: Letters from Home
Velveteen chapter 4 . 8/2/2018
So good to see the changes in Harry's kingdom. The thought of a cocky, cheerful orphan named Grayson makes me squee, as a diehard Nightwing stan. Does this make Harry Batman? Dead parents, hordes of orphan children...
atchoum35 chapter 4 . 8/2/2018
good chapter, thanks, continue, this is great
Sociopathic-Antichrist chapter 4 . 8/2/2018
Hah, go Amun!

Now all he needs is to get relationship advice and he's set!

Glad to see the updates. :D
The Sound Shaman chapter 4 . 8/2/2018
That's fantastic. Highly amusing. Thanks.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29/2018
I don't recall where Netan was intoduced, but this on it's own is enough to make me love him.
Chronocidal chapter 3 . 3/14/2018
Interesting point here - when Harry came back in time, "Attack of the Clones" had been released. The current point in time, the most recent Star Wars film was "The Phantom Menace".

So, it's entirely possible that Aisha will be able to regale Teal'c with tales of "The Army of One Man", etc
myself chapter 2 . 3/12/2018
on the second chapter, I think Harry would find himself strangely proud of these guys. even if a little disgusted.
myself chapter 3 . 3/12/2018
is she one of those that heard harry tell this tale?
Guest chapter 3 . 3/12/2018
I think I get what this chapter was going for, but the actual result was plodding in its pace and lacking any of the charm of Aisha's chapters in Shattering.

It oscillates between thinly veiled wanking of western culture and even more thinly veiled critique of your personal bugbears. Which I don't disagree with, but do find totally unsuited to the perspective of this character. I mean are you really trying to suggest she doesn't understand pornography or idealised imagery? Really?

Also having christianity shoved down the reader's throat with every chapter of this series is getting incredibly tiresome, especially given how much it contradicts the tone of Stargate concerning religion.

This needs edited into something punchier and more characterful.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/12/2018
cool
Guest chapter 3 . 3/12/2018
Just when I though I couldn't love your story more you have Teal'c binging Star Wars with my favorite priestess
KyliaQuilor chapter 3 . 3/14/2018
*cackle

Also

"Aisha was sincerely starting to worry that the Tau'ri viewed filling out paperwork as a sort of religious obligation in service of an as of yet unknown god of menial busywork abandoned by the rest of the Patheons in the hopes that he might meet his end on the First World."

:P
Ranger Station Charlie chapter 3 . 3/13/2018
Good to see these little side stories updated. Nice to see what happened to our priestess.
dudeler chapter 3 . 3/13/2018
Didnt dresden tell the star wars to the orphans on his shiny new world?
oddhack chapter 3 . 3/13/2018
Oh, dear. I hope this doesn't set the stage for galactic battles between Followers of Luke Skywalker and James Kirk.
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