|Reviews for Loose Ends|
| The Sylver Lining chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
Oh goodness, I REALLY hope this is continued. Your writing style is fascinating, particularly the thought-interpsersions. They're disjointed without being distracting, which I think given the circumstances is exactly right.
My favorite part is absolutely "three for maybe, four to go," the silly defense-mechanism - that's just so perfectly realistic and natural and... well, HUMAN, for lack of a better word. Even when they're Akrennians, you have to make characters human for them to work. Wonderful job.
Glad someone besides me thought Preed getting that /abnormally thick/ neck snapped was utter bunk. It either wouldn't work completely, or he was playing possum (entirely in-character, that'd be)... of course I have my own take on it. [/shameless fic pluggage.]
I know it's been years, but damn, I want to see this continued. Badly. I miss Preed, the slimy, complicated maniac, and there's only so much of a voice writing him myself can fill. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
| lady of the wilds chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
wow what a great story i can see that it's been years since you updated so i'm not going to hold my breath but i really want to read more
| Potentially Insane Fangirl chapter 3 . 1/9/2010
Usually I'm not into these whole "bringing characters back from the dead" fanfictions as they tend to be rushed and unrealistic, however your story has proven my opinion to be, obviously, not always correct. You handled the subject with care and didn't make it seem as though you were just bringing him back for your own enjoyment. The story actually has me really intrigued and everyone is completely in-character. Unfortunately, seeing as you haven't updated since '03, I suppose I shouldn't be expecting one anytime soon. However, if you do decide to come back to this story, I'll definitely be one of the first ones at it. :P
| Indigo Dragoness chapter 3 . 10/25/2009
Ooh, this is getting good. I thought it sucked that Preed turned bad and was (according to Wikipedia) killed. But keep up the good work, write more soon. :D
| MegaShinyObject chapter 3 . 10/19/2008
This is really good! I thought you captured the character of Gune really well, which I love because, besides Preed, Gune is my favorite character!
I wish I could think up this stuff, but sci-fi really isn't my specialty...
| paladinofthelantern chapter 3 . 8/21/2005
Could you inlude some or a lot of Preed and Stith romance. Please...*sniffs* Thank you. Good chapter.
| paladinofthelantern chapter 2 . 8/21/2005
I hope you continue this story...it's good.
| paladinofthelantern chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
Good job. :)
| RavenSage chapter 3 . 5/11/2005
You probably don't recognize me, I haven't quite activated my account yet, so I haven't left many reviews.
THIS IS A GREAT FIC! I think you did an awesome job at keeping the characters the way they're supposed to, not like other fics I've read at other ites. I especially like the way ou mark your thoughts... That's really cool.
Anyways, if there's any place for improvement, I can only say that more description would make it even better, but not too much. I'm so frickin' horrible at that. I either have too much (way way way too much) description, or not enough...
And keep up the fantasimallistic work!
| April chapter 3 . 10/20/2003
Oh, what are we kidding? This story's toast...! I'm so so sad right now...
| Aahz the Chupacabra chapter 3 . 10/2/2003
Great, keep it up!
| April chapter 3 . 7/8/2003
Losing faith in author...Must not give up...Must keep wishing for more...chapters...Must not give up...
| foxyboy chapter 3 . 6/18/2003
good story keep up the work want the next chapter yes
| April chapter 3 . 6/7/2003
You must update !
| Tigrin chapter 3 . 5/25/2003
*pokes the Titan AE section* It's alive! ... sorta.
This is great so far... I like Preed's thoughts, those are definitely in character. ;) I'm not particularly a Preed fan, but still. What I'm curious about is why they didn't just put him out of his misery instead of pitying him... I guess the other characters aren't as cold. Plus I think Cale might have a certain reason for not wanting to kill Preed... Preed's sort of like a spirital link to Korso, in a way, and unless you're bringing him back too, then that might be important. ;3 Anyways. Hope you keep on with this... wish I could do the same. *mutters about her own fic*