Reviews for Written in the Stars
XFoxMuldersGirlX chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
... "Tell Fox Mulder that Dana Scully loves him too."

I was in tears as i read that line - it was just too beautiful for words :0)

Loved your story. Great job chicken. Well done :0)
SureFineWhatever chapter 2 . 11/28/2006
Wow! I can't believe that was your first X-Files Fan Fic! I thought it was fantastic and I would love you to do more. You got their love for each other spot on and described it so wonderfully. Can't praise you enough. Well Done! SureFineWhatever x
Scully22 chapter 2 . 9/22/2005
...wow... i dont know what to say... that was... amazing. wow... you really really captured mulder and scully's relationship. this is a classic mulder-scully fanfic... you are a great writer and just wow... lol this story really affected me. great, great job. -Vj
Creeps chapter 2 . 3/5/2004
Hmm, nice story, but please; USE THE SPELLCHECKER! It's got lots of errors which are just anoying when reading, it just messes up the atmosphere of the story.
Other than that: Sweet :)
V31 chapter 2 . 2/13/2004
That was a nice story. God willing I'll have a high school class reunion like that.
RussianWolf7 chapter 2 . 1/24/2004
I haven't been reviewing a lot, but I just wanted to tell you that I really loved the last bit.
"Well Fox Mulder has the wildest inclination that he loves Dana Scully but he's not really sure that Dana Scully loves him." Looking into her eyes Fox was shocked to find tears streaming down her cheeks... "God Scully I'm sorry.. I didn't mean to..." Scully shook her head and placed her finger on his lips.. hushing him... "Tell Fox Mulder that Dana Scully loves him too."
Sarah Taylor chapter 2 . 7/3/2003
I loved it! I hope you write more soon!
TLWROX chapter 2 . 7/1/2003
Great story- very very sweet. I love Mulder getting jealous... heehee... Very good- especially for your first fic! :) :) :)
Charliedq chapter 2 . 5/26/2003
That was really sweet. I loved the ending, the middle and the beginning! Lol
rowan-greenleaf chapter 2 . 5/16/2003
Oh, that was nice. Very sweet and light.

One thing though, your Mulder and Scully take themseleves way too seriously.I think that the their relationship should be a bit more relaxed,despite the sexual tension.

And your Mulder needs work. Think of the "real" Mulder. He might be jealous of Scully, but he would never be so obvious about it, you know? Or so overly protective of Scully. I know that for the sake of the plot these things were necessary, but they really take away. Other than that,it's a very nice fic and an original idea

Trancos
Jinxd n cursed chapter 2 . 5/7/2003
good. I enjoyed it.
Lenale chapter 2 . 5/3/2003
Wow. Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. Write more!
Jules13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2003
Ok hopefully I have fixed the paragraph problem. The changes should show up later on today. Thanks to all who read a comment on my stories.

jules
MarauderMooney chapter 2 . 3/25/2003
Wow, for a first that was pretty damn good. My wife and I enjoyed it very much and we've read a lot of smutty Mulder and Scully romances, this wasn't smutty at all. Rather well handled for it's content. Great job, keep writing. Next time, however, might be a better idea to separate all the paragraphs, kind of hard to read. Otherwise, great job.