Interesting first few chapters, but the whole “11-12 year olds asking for sex” bit is kind of silly. This would have worked much better three years later and had more impact. Now it just feels like little kids playing at being grown ups. Diminishes Harry, in my view.

Will probably just skip to the end, see how you closed this out. Thanks for writing.

Was that Alucard's dialogue from episode 3 of the abridged series copied word for word?

Nice! I really liked the subplot with Lucius, I wasn't expecting it!

By far the best story, and writing, I have ever seen on here. The story had me hooked at the beginning, kept me on my toes, made me feel ever bit of emotion throughout every encounter. I am sad to see it end. All i can say is, well done. I hope youre proud of your work!

Poor Luna, so bright, so sweet, and instead of seeing herself as Harry,ies followers shield, she can only see the dark part.

And again dark vs evil, siiiigh.

Let's see if Harry doesn't have some I tered ting rituals on his platter soon.

A randomly turned undead Luna, a doll Hermione and a fire blooded ginny perhaps...

But I guess that's just me.

A bit too fast and... Blatant this time? Or maybe it's the lack of lemons since I switched, as they kept distracting me... Fish or chips.

You did too much skipping and avoiding topics for this story to be enjoyable. The talk with Dobby highlights that ignorance. No why the warning, how he got in, or who he was. Threat and counterthreat and it's over. I shook my head and said nope, not worth it.

unique story at first but it quickly derails into shallow smut, nothing indepth, just girls and sex, no storyline or what so ever, lost interest in it, hoping for something better, good luck with your writing.

Oops. Or she.

Yeah, Guest 3-24 ch3 got on the writer's case about misspelling Zabini, but he misspelled you're in the second sentence of his comment. He also used the wrong tense, should've been given, not gave. I don't care about spelling until the Grammar Nazis start doing this sh**.

I’m about to start reading this story because I just finished blessed blood and this writer is top tier.

I scrolled through the reviews of this fic and I have to say….

Guest 3-24 ch3 is an asshole!

I enjoyed your story. I liked how you developed Harry and changed the perspective on what was evil. I did get a bit bored with the harem stuff but it was easy enough to skim through. I liked the resolution of both Neville’s and Ron’s stories and the hints of what was to come. I also liked the integration of the muggle world. I would have liked a look at what the future looked like but that is a minor point in such a long story. Thank you for take the time and effort to write and the share your story.

This is an inventive and well written story with so many different aspects. I am really enjoying super powered Harry and the impact he is having on the magical world. Thank you for sharing

Wow. You really moved Harry into the psychopath category with this chapter. This is a really interesting story and I am intrigued as to where it will go. Thank you for sharing your ideas