Reviews for Step into Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() With Dummy's manipulating things, getting out of England sounds good. Ireland, France, or the United States would be the best choices. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Voldemort and Hermione/Hope had their first meeting. It's going to take time for the two of them to call one another family, but that will come in time. As for Dummy and the Order of the Fried Chickens, let them demand that Hermione come back with them! She feels better with the Malfoy's than with the Order, who would rather kill her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumb Nuts, you think that you can find Hermione/Hope? Think again Bub! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If there is anyone that Hermione can talk to about what she found out, it's Snape. He may be a double agent, but he does care about certain students. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Appreciated the early warning about the pairing. I'm out, but I just wanted to send my appreciation for letting us know in advance that this is a Dramione fic now, instead of letting me get however many chapters/books into the fic series before learning i wasted my time reading a fic i never would have picked up in the first place. FF has a pairing option for the characters you can list. adjusting your character list to reflect the pairing would make the AU unnecessary, though. |
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![]() ![]() It is a rather intriguing, elaborate and to a certain extent terrifying story, due to the great manipulation of an unscrupulous person. ..Let's continue with the second part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've done a great job of Dark Lord Dumbledore! With everything he did in canon, he always seemed like a possible dark lord. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story has a great start, but it begins losing my attention as I read it. You got a Hermione who discovers a secret, and after that loses all her morals. I felt that even thought the story was interesting, Hermione was drastically downgraded for the plot, and I didn't like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your dark!Hermione/Voldemort's daughter fics, even more so when there is dark!Harry. first reread of this one! hope you write more like these in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() The path to hell is full of good intentions |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent, excellent beginning! Kudos! Adding to Favorites. Dark!Hermione is not usually my cup of tea, but your story is internally consistent and the characters nicely fleshed out. No plot holes to date I could see. And her plight is truly compelling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now I'm just waiting for Hope to ask her father to teach her what he knows. I bet she'll be a quick-study. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed this one |