|Reviews for Glory and Vengeance|
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/9/2018
my other - my mother
the cities - the city's
"reckless endangerment of a minor"
What, did they try to arrest her for endangering herself? That just sounds stupid.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/9/2018
You could use an editor, the writing is a bit rough around the edges in places.
spotted bracelet - spotted the bracelet
smasher - smashed
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/9/2018
he underestimated - she underestimated
| TTGG03 chapter 5 . 2/11/2018
Oooohhhhhhh, this seems really nice. Can you elaborate on the gangs still in effect? Is Lung still there?
| Edale chapter 5 . 2/6/2018
It's "Greater New York", not "Great New York".
| 1228248 chapter 1 . 2/6/2018
Nice story, but I would suggest doing something to separate the scenes. Jumping from school to the past and back with nothing separating the two is a little distracting.