Reviews for Stalker Online
User Closed chapter 6 . 8/31/2020
I have a little trouble understanding why the moonlight cats didn't matter?
This event forced Kirito traumatized to re-embrace the path of a solo player, until Asuna consoles him.

and on the wiki, it is indeed confirmed that Sachi and Kirito would have a romantic relationship but that Reiki would have erased it.
you don't have to be Albert Einstein to understand why.
x-x-TheBurnedMan-x-x chapter 10 . 4/6/2020
The only thing worth wasting your time on regarding that cheating asshole are his missions, which isn’t saying much considering that some of his artefact missions are like 25 percent hit and 75 percent miss and add in to the fact that there are other players who are eager for an artefact, you’re most likely shit out of luck finding a rare one worth a lot of ru.
x-x-TheBurnedMan-x-x chapter 10 . 4/6/2020
sells Crystal artefact for only 1500 ru and he says ‘Naka died for this?’.

Yes, he died for that. Such is life in the zone so you better not spend that measly earnings in one place lol. You know what else is bullshit? Some guy sold his good AK rifle for 150 ru to Sidorovich and do you know how much he pays for a Makarov pistol from him? 1200 ru. Almost the same amount as your earnings.

Sidorovich FTW

‘Plays Bandit radio song and dances like a slav madman’

As Boris would’ve like to say, stay cheeki breeki.
UnkownSoul chapter 10 . 4/3/2020
Well, that was a nice one to show how curel the zone (and game) is.

But was it intentional that I could see the target being an actual player coming the moment the hiding place was discribed? Or have I just gotten used to stuff like that with this story?
x-x-TheBurnedMan-x-x chapter 9 . 6/21/2019
Btw, author, before you make any assumptions, that anger wasn’t necessarily directed to you. That was more of a reaction of their quote unqoute -fates- that has befallen at them so you can just ignore that or take that into consideration. Have a good day
x-x-TheBurnedMan-x-x chapter 9 . 6/21/2019
Tsk, goddamnit, WHY?! Chapter every chapter are just misfortunes scrEAMING at ya. It’s like saying -Hey hey, you. Hey, YOU! Fxxx you, you’re back at square. See you later, bxxxxxs- at every single corner turn you take.

Can you make a bit more of a progress already? From what I’ve understood, most of them are still on their starter gear because their loots were either get left behind or were robbed by some assholes at gunpoint. Please, do something like that when they’re at the middle part of this whole game, where they already had decent gears and money in reserve to compensate for those losses because seeing something like this at the very beginning just leaves me in this SEETHING ANGER to flip this table in rage. It’s fxxxing triggers me for some unknown reason. Seriously, I know it’s a death game but after all that hardwork, who wouldn’t be pissed at that after it was taken away.

-sigh- Need to calm down. If this was your intention all along, you did a great job pissing me off, author.

-Keemstar scream- AAAHHHHHHHH
x-x-TheBurnedMan-x-x chapter 1 . 6/21/2019
Now, regarding about the part were big SAO fans would be pissed? Personally, feel free to rip it apart and reassemble it again for a better consistent plot because I always thought that the series was great until I realized some of its flaws and this is coming from someone who was a big fan of SAO during its heyday and would throw fuel to the flames if the criticism were a bit unreasonable and if said criticism resembled some form of biased hate but that’s about how far I would defend. The rest of it, I would understand it at some point.

Though regarding about the stalker series, I have limited knowledge about it since I skipped to the third game, Call of Pripyat, which I thought would be more polished given that this series is quite notorious for bugs and glitches but even then, it wasn’t that much of a difference when I experienced thoseanomaliesfor myself, so do give some big hints and pointers if there is something important that needs to be mentioned. I remember the part where Agil mentioned something about the quest where you need to find the monolith soldier some faction and I really did that quest in CoP but if there are some tidbits from SoC and CS, keep it mind that I will be on the dark on that one. That’s about it. Thx for reading.
UnkownSoul chapter 9 . 6/5/2019
I see Sinon found an almost friend!
Thermidor606 chapter 8 . 3/11/2019
Only thing I can think of is that I didn't get a clear picture of the layout of where they were fighting In some of the scenes, but that isn't that big of a deal since everything else fit together so well.
UnkownSoul chapter 8 . 3/3/2019
Well, I'm going to disappoint you. I have nothing to criticise!

Yuuki being not enterly confidant, Aiko not really liking Sinon and Sinon, after a looong time alone, being slightly rude all fits really well together!
Looking forward to how they will get along in the future.

The firefight as well was great, really felt like "Yeah, a single hit would be the downfall for those three."
Vercingetorix Rex chapter 7 . 12/17/2018
No moonlight cats? lol
I hope you're not going to fend off the Moonlight Cats as if they didn't exist indefinitely?

I just read on reddit that in the web novel version, Sachi was Kirito's FIRST love! OxO

in the light novel, Sachi goes from First Love to the girl who dies for "the good of the plot"!
When reading the novel, I wondered why Sachi had so little development and what would have happened if she had survived?
I've always found it a bit odd that, given the time spent together, their relationship didn't go beyond being mere comrades in arms and if they had the time to develop it, they would have ended up couple.

now I am fixed! I know that Sachi was Kirito's first love, Asuna only coming second!
RIP Sachi you will stay forever in my heart as the FIRST and TRUE love of Kirito! lol

indeed, it's not as if Sachi had any significance in Kirito's life!

poor Sachi, already that the author has massacred her development voluntarily in the canon, but in addition the author prefers to repel her rather than to give her her place in this story and in Kirito's heart as well of course
OmegaEleven chapter 7 . 11/14/2018
the idea of a STALKERxSAO crossover is just...idk, i never thought i would see the day with me reading such story, as i have a strong distaste for SAO to be honest(but loooove the STALKER games), so reading this crossover has been quite the experience, and because of that i must congratulate you because i read all of it.

some additions:
- while is kinda difficult to "get" some of the characters (because my lack of better knowledge about SAO), you wrote them in a way that this is not much of a problem for reading the story, so good job.
-i agree with the whole "harem-like" stuff (calling it like that because as far as i know he is only dating Asuna) weighing down a concept that could have been more good. well, that and the other points you mentioned. just saying.
- and i really hope for the chance of Strelok (or whatishisname from CoP) making a cameo at least,
with that said,
i will look forward to the next update
Psihopatul chapter 7 . 11/13/2018
it is good to get a new chapter to this, I am wondering few aspects of this story how it'll turn out and what will be in the story. Non-NPC Monolithians? And I know this supposed to be mostly on Shadow of Chernobyl related though i can't remember if i already asked this but what of Clear Sky and Call of Pripyat locations? i do see Call of Pripyat locations could be nice addition to the story however it would only open up AFTER the Brain Scorcher has been turned off.

Keep it up. It is very interesting what you got for S.T.A.L.K.E.R. universe in this story. Good Hunting till next chapter.
UnkownSoul chapter 7 . 11/13/2018
So the bandits returned to take Sinon out! She probably is one of their biggest targets, with how many she has to have killed already...
AmethystPone chapter 6 . 11/8/2018
Welp...Looking forward to more...Since I am kinda liking it thus far.
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