This was truly great. Thank you for this incredible book, it really did feel like I was reading Terry Pratchett! I would have paid good money for this book, and I'm willing to pay for the next. Money is, after all, the sincerest form of flattery.

A good solid discworld tale. Well done and may you write many more :-)

Well that was both different and very much n keeping with canon. A grand tale, well constructed and flows properly. Well done, most enjoyable.

I like how the main characters met each other, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top

I have finished chapter 5 and am looking forward to the rest of it. The author has captured the spirit of the Discworld novels beautifully. That is not something that I say lightly. Excellent work so far.

Death doesn't speak like that. Ever.

I shall never embrace fan fiction as long as I live!
-IF YOU SAY SO. SHALL WE GO?
Oh. Oh, bugger.

But seriously, I enjoyed the first chapter. Onward!

I finished this story last night and it has stayed with me today. Thorougly enjoyed it, although my suspension of disbelief foundered a bit on the bustle subplot! Very good writing, catching the feel of Pterry's work without being too derivative. Thank you!

A great story, and very much in the style of pTerry himself, with countless hidden gems and puns. I liked the cameo by Senor Basilica, too, and a tiny bit more background on Willikins. Graphite was an interesting character as well; Bianca though seemed a bit two-dimensional.

I love this story! It captures the spirit of discworld so well! it really feels like one of the books. you're amazing.

This is wonderful. Thank you so much for this story, full of the spirit of Pterry and the Disc. Your creations fit nicely into the existing world, and you handle the cannon elements with great skill.

I didn't like how the Summoning Dark was used in _Snuff_, but your take on it sits better with me. Maybe because here, it was used against another Dark, and not just as a supernatural short-cut to gather evidence. And matching it with Carrot's 'Guiding Light' was a masterstroke.

This is brilliant! You've really captured Pratchett's style, and introduced a nice little mystery. I look forward to reading the rest.

wonderful story. felt very Terry pratchet. good work

I have only just found Fan Fiction and this was the first story I’ve read. As an almost life long fan of Terry (almost because I am still breathing), it has been a great experience. The characters, feel, atmosphere, sheer lunacy, jokes and observations of the human condition are so Pratchett. Many congratulations and please keep at it.

Absolutely brilliant story and really captured the essence of terry pratchett. Truly felt like I could've been reading one of his novels. Discworld is the richer for this story.