|Reviews for New Shores complete rewrite,english version|
| Difdi chapter 1 . 5/26
You have a lot of spelling and grammar errors, you should probably find a beta reader who is a native English speaker.
Paradim shields scans like a spelling error - is paradim short for para-dimensional or is it a misspelling of paradigm?
| Shinzochi chapter 4 . 12/24/2013
i like this story though this last chapter has been the most confusing and from what i understand this story is basically the origins of the Federation and the Borg, i hope there will bew more chapters
| rankokun alpha chapter 4 . 5/28/2006
i love the rewrite so far i hope to see more chapters in the near future!
| Happosai-sama chapter 4 . 4/14/2004
Exelent! I love this story, hurry with the updates _
DEATH TO THE MOON B1TCH!1!
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 4 . 4/14/2004
Very good chapter.
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 3 . 4/14/2004
IT IS GREAT CHAPTER!
| Joe Fenton chapter 3 . 2/7/2004
Not bad. You can tell that English isn't your first language, but it's still much better than some of the English authors here at . :)
This is a very good rewrite. Please keep up the good work.
| JPalmgren chapter 2 . 11/21/2003
This new version is really getting interesting. Both the story and the language have improved a lot and there are only a few remaining minor errors...
Waiting for the next part,
| Gopu chapter 2 . 11/20/2003
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
gee...make sure to ignore people who make one liners or else have your ego explode and make a crap fic that will get flamers instead.
I see that fic fanfic has some detail...maybe enough to enterain the mind of the above average reader.
I don't mean to say to put so much detail into every little crumb or something, but just a little bit more to intrest some more people.
I think some people don't know about Infinity's Shore and might go there to flame it and insult the writer that made that series. only a possitility mind you as that might not happen. it could, but who knows. make sure to add a link on the fanfic saying something about Infinity's Shore and such. it will make some people understand your fanfic a bit as well also help out stopping some other things I won't mention as you'll find out soon enough.
| Holy Sasami chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
I hope you get around to writeing some new stuff for this story. Im looking forward to reading more.
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 2 . 11/19/2003
GREAT chapters, need more soon (I hope).
| Teal Thanatos chapter 1 . 7/23/2003
Both this and the old version of the story are with their good points. However I feel that the shortness of the current series does not do justice to the beginning made by mr Barnhill.
| Jerry Unipeg chapter 1 . 4/16/2003
Very good story. I am looking forward to chapter 2.
| JPalmgren chapter 1 . 4/16/2003
Great rewrite. Language, plot and text has come together into the beginning of a good story.