|Reviews for Eclipse of the Sun|
| Codi chapter 1 . 9/21
Really good storyline I would love to see you do an Arya/Oberyn story
| amerdism chapter 7 . 9/4
Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up?
| SunshineBubbles chapter 7 . 8/2
Nice story please update soon
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 7 . 4/2
I... Physically can't WAIT for the next chapter!
PS: Male Daenerys x Fem Jon (Lyarra) pleaseee!
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 2 . 4/2
male daenerys x lyarra
| Hearteyesmf chapter 7 . 3/12
This story is fantastic, I love seeing Lyarra build a life in Dorne and especially enjoy her bonding with Oberyn and the Sand Snakes. In future chapters I look forward to revisiting Winterfell so Catelyn can see what an awesome lady Lyarra turned into. Also I love your other Lyarra/Robb story and I’m hoping something similar may happen between the two in this story. They would make a great couple and Catelyn would be furious which is always a plus. Romance is probably pretty far off in this story, but I’m still looking forward to Lyarra’s many suitors. Willas, Quentyn, and Aegon all three seem like especially great candidates if Robb is out. Can’t wait to read the rest of this story, update soon please!
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/15
I don't think an eight year old can write so well, but otherwise, love the story. Please do update. It's really tragic when a story as promising is abandoned.
| beserkerbeast chapter 7 . 12/13/2018
love to see more
| Krysania chapter 7 . 11/15/2018
| Squidgod812 chapter 7 . 11/14/2018
| Carol542 chapter 7 . 11/11/2018
Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it
| FANactic Writer chapter 7 . 11/10/2018
Love the fic!~
| zeyreele chapter 2 . 10/23/2018
Is it too late to suggest pairings? since she’s in dorne she could be with edric dayne instead of gerold? it’d be interesting bc in canon edric believes he knows who jon snow’s mother is (even if its not confirmed if that actually is his mother), they might bond over a story arc when the lies get exposed and everyone is trying to find out what the truth is
or aegon, as in rhaegar and elia’s son. This would be more interesting and a more flexible pairing i think, plus i think it’d be nice if through lyarra(who they falsely assume is a close relative) they get aegon, elia’s son! it’d be kind of poetic and it’ll even things out nicely so that the martell’s still get their long lost family member, even if it’s not who they thought it would be. Plus, gotta deal with lyarra’s actual parentage and all that comes with it somehow! thrones and all ;)
| Bad Ass Female Fighter chapter 7 . 10/9/2018
What's happening on Ned's end? Not that I hate Lyarra's time in Dorne, I'm just curious. When the truth gets out and she doesn't get burned by fire, there's gonna be a lot of p*ssed off people. But Oberyn can't hate his 'niece' since they are of the same blood if history was any indication. Besides, she's the half-sister to his niece and nephew, there's gotta be some love there. I look forward to that conversation between Oberyn and Eddard when the Viper confronts him about that lie. I can see it now, there love for their sisters and their distaste towards Tywin for the deaths of the Targaryen children. They may not like each other, but they do have much in common. I hope to see more from you soon, good luck.
| Vaughn Tyler chapter 7 . 9/6/2018