| Reviews for Eclipse of the Sun |
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   Arturia LeFay chapter 7 . 3/27 I'm still laughing at the summary, I thought 2 and 2 makes fish! |
| Tate horan chapter 7 . 5/27/2022 I wish you update soon. Robb/Lyarra please, they are amazing together. |
| Mortal Book Lover chapter 7 . 4/4/2022 You know what, Daemon seems like a good choice too Love this story! I have re-read it so many times! |
| Mortal Book Lover chapter 5 . 4/4/2022 I kind of want her to end up with Addam Marbrand, it's not a usual pairing and from his description he sounds like he would be compatible with Lyarra! |
| Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 7 . 10/31/2021 Wish there was more |
| Don-Jam chapter 7 . 8/19/2021 What a charming story! I especially enjoyed the Daynes here. |
| Lairenna chapter 7 . 11/22/2020 Oh I love this! I hope you'll pick it up again! |
| TomRiddlesTwin chapter 7 . 9/21/2020 Awesome! Love this! |
| Literary Consumer chapter 1 . 9/8/2020 This is brilliant so far. I do hope you come back to it soon |
| Caver Floyd chapter 7 . 6/25/2020 Another interesting start to a story with good potential. Hope to see it continued eventually. |
| Caver Floyd chapter 4 . 6/25/2020 This chapter has the mother of all darkly humorous typos in it. "a stuffed peasant that had been shot by the hunting party earlier" I assume that is supposed to be pheasant. I hope the Daynes are not in the habit of eating their smallfolk for supper. lol |
| Codi chapter 1 . 9/21/2019 Really good storyline I would love to see you do an Arya/Oberyn story |
| amerdism chapter 7 . 9/4/2019 Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up? |
| SunshineBubbles chapter 7 . 8/2/2019 Nice story please update soon |
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 7 . 4/2/2019 I... Physically can't WAIT for the next chapter! PS: Male Daenerys x Fem Jon (Lyarra) pleaseee! |