|Reviews for Eclipse of the Sun|
| Tate horan chapter 7 . 5/27
I wish you update soon. Robb/Lyarra please, they are amazing together.
| Mortal Book Lover chapter 7 . 4/4
You know what, Daemon seems like a good choice too Love this story! I have re-read it so many times!
| Mortal Book Lover chapter 5 . 4/4
I kind of want her to end up with Addam Marbrand, it's not a usual pairing and from his description he sounds like he would be compatible with Lyarra!
| Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 7 . 10/31/2021
Wish there was more
| Don-Jam chapter 7 . 8/19/2021
What a charming story! I especially enjoyed the Daynes here.
| Lairenna chapter 7 . 11/22/2020
Oh I love this! I hope you'll pick it up again!
| TomRiddlesTwin chapter 7 . 9/21/2020
Awesome! Love this!
| Literary Consumer chapter 1 . 9/8/2020
This is brilliant so far. I do hope you come back to it soon
| Caver Floyd chapter 7 . 6/25/2020
Another interesting start to a story with good potential. Hope to see it continued eventually.
| Caver Floyd chapter 4 . 6/25/2020
This chapter has the mother of all darkly humorous typos in it.
"a stuffed peasant that had been shot by the hunting party earlier"
I assume that is supposed to be pheasant. I hope the Daynes are not in the habit of eating their smallfolk for supper. lol
| Codi chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
Really good storyline I would love to see you do an Arya/Oberyn story
| amerdism chapter 7 . 9/4/2019
Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up?
| SunshineBubbles chapter 7 . 8/2/2019
Nice story please update soon
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 7 . 4/2/2019
I... Physically can't WAIT for the next chapter!
PS: Male Daenerys x Fem Jon (Lyarra) pleaseee!
| Valen Goncalvez chapter 2 . 4/2/2019
male daenerys x lyarra