| Reviews for Shadow of the Bay |
|---|
   arianamax177 chapter 1 . 3/20 Your story "Shadow of the Bay" has the ingredients of something legendary characters clamoring to be seen, a world wanting to be explored, and a plot begging to unfold in breathtaking visuals! With years of experience turning stories into vivid, dynamic comics, a professional paid artist. I can turn your words into a work of genius whether they chronicle exciting adventures, cosy moments, or adrenaline packed fights. We will produce something to be remembered for. Ask for my socials to view my work. DM me on Discord: f4coso4005 |
| Hyperman15 chapter 11 . 10/24/2024 The author cooked here, all 11 chapters. |
| ShaiGar chapter 11 . 12/5/2023 I miss this story. |
| nioclas64 chapter 11 . 10/29/2023 Damn, this was good AF, shame it ended |
| mst3ktoo chapter 11 . 1/14/2023 I enjoyed this and would read moreif it were availability |
| mst3ktoo chapter 7 . 1/14/2023 Strike two? Or is it 3 because he violated the agreement just by contacting her AND blackmail? Either way, behead the snake quietly would be a change of pace from the standard pitched battle plus echidna plus blown up everything |
| mst3ktoo chapter 5 . 1/14/2023 Lol, I can picture it now, within minutes Armsmaster will have a coffee stand that came out of his halberd set up in the lobby giving decaf to the tourists in a frantic race to unload it all before his current dose of atomic coffee wears off and he passes out where he stands like a robot with a dead battery. . ..run on, sentence, run on. |
| mst3ktoo chapter 3 . 1/14/2023 Don't make important decisions after consuming mind altering substances, kids. |
| Sreym Sallad chapter 6 . 9/20/2022 I wonder if she had any cabbages in her groceries. |
| anon chapter 11 . 2/15/2022 Great fic! BTW. I found that there are 13 chapters at forums. spacebattles. com Maybe you could upload them here too? |
| drkprince chapter 1 . 1/4/2022 what a drab topic...this is what really happened ten ten threw kunai...missed as usual when it mattered and died.. end story...she only knew basic sealing. like sealing weapons.. coz she is a weapons nut not a seals prodigy.. so yeah.. too much AU .. |
| Flen99 chapter 11 . 12/9/2021 Good stuff |
| Aarik Wrath chapter 5 . 8/7/2021 Tenten's listed specialty as a ninja is Fuinjutsu, and her weapon collection/kunai throwing is listed as a useful hobby, so. We just don't often get to see her bust out seals, but it is notable she was able to use the Sage's sealing tools, and seemingly was about to seal Madara using them moments before the Mugen Tsukuyomi went off, and apparently her control over them was enough to partially block the Mugen Tsukuyomi, because unlike everyone else, she was aware she was trapped. She's one of the only relatively modern sealing specialists for Konoha we have listed other than Jiraiya, Minato and Kushina, as well. But then, this fic seems dead, so... |
| Caver Floyd chapter 11 . 7/31/2021 Good story. Wish there was more of it. |
| xfel chapter 11 . 6/20/2021 I really like the whole subtlety and thinker plans at work here. It's rare to find stuff like that well-executed. Also, Dragon likes Lisa's troll Armsmaster Slash fic. Hahaha. |