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![]() ![]() ![]() I can finally write a review. I have read every chapter you can thank the YouTube series that was a 10 hour burn for the first party your book for me finding this. I gotta say I was not expecting seeing how that they named it whatever Harry Potter and Mary Bellatrix, I was not expecting what Harry Potter had a harem But definitely a 10 and a 10 you sit at the world amazingly every little bit had a reason for being put into it |
![]() ![]() I always thought that " ADAVA KEDAVRA " was a fairly stupid phrase for a killing curse -Personally i think that TRACE MORTEM ( Silent Death ) or VIRIDIS MORTEM ( Green Death ) would be a lot more accurate - Because the death curse as it stands sounds far to much like " Abracadabra " . Just saying . |
![]() ![]() So dumdfuckdore is evil or is harry going to forgive him in this story? |
![]() ![]() This story has descended so far into the realm of retarded nonsense there is absolutely no saving it, it's nothing but garbage at this point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() someone ship the image of Dumbledore to Gellert |
![]() ![]() ![]() wuat happened to Slytherin house |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i guess he went from 16 richest to about 8th just then lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() james and sirius up there laughing their ass off. albeit, probably hiding from Lily |
![]() ![]() old puffy bollocks dumbles lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fate would not be so cruel, but one can't put anything past a fanfic author who pens 146 chapters and 288,578 interminable words for what should have been a simple story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This last line (and the one previously written about the same subject) are worth reading the entire story. Thanks for a great laugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() which will be sometime this fall Fall? Did you mean Autumn? She’s British not American |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im not a fan of this chapter its rather silly A duel that can take everything you have if you refuse? Just sounds like something out of a bad fanfiction lol Just comes across badly but the story itself isn’t that bad |