I can finally write a review. I have read every chapter you can thank the YouTube series that was a 10 hour burn for the first party your book for me finding this. I gotta say I was not expecting seeing how that they named it whatever Harry Potter and Mary Bellatrix, I was not expecting what Harry Potter had a harem But definitely a 10 and a 10 you sit at the world amazingly every little bit had a reason for being put into it

I always thought that " ADAVA KEDAVRA " was a fairly stupid phrase for a killing curse -Personally i think that TRACE MORTEM ( Silent Death ) or VIRIDIS MORTEM ( Green Death ) would be a lot more accurate - Because the death curse as it stands sounds far to much like " Abracadabra " .
Just saying .

So dumdfuckdore is evil or is harry going to forgive him in this story?

This story has descended so far into the realm of retarded nonsense there is absolutely no saving it, it's nothing but garbage at this point.

Excellent job.

i love this

someone ship the image of Dumbledore to Gellert

wuat happened to Slytherin house

well i guess he went from 16 richest to about 8th just then lol

james and sirius up there laughing their ass off. albeit, probably hiding from Lily

old puffy bollocks dumbles lol

Fate would not be so cruel, but one can't put anything past a fanfic author who pens 146 chapters and 288,578 interminable words for what should have been a simple story.

This last line (and the one previously written about the same subject) are worth reading the entire story. Thanks for a great laugh.

which will be sometime this fall

Fall? Did you mean Autumn? She’s British not American

Im not a fan of this chapter its rather silly

A duel that can take everything you have if you refuse?
Just sounds like something out of a bad fanfiction lol

Just comes across badly but the story itself isn’t that bad