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| JamesTKent chapter 3 . 2/26
I love it!
| jwill21 chapter 3 . 2/26
Lol, this was probably the most entertaining chapter of this story! Great work! It was funny to see him on the defensive and embarrassed having to explain why he took 5 hours to locate the Bat Cave. Lol Clark could have saved himself (and the world) so much time and effort if he had just used his X-ray vision as soon as he arrived to Gotham! Also loved how you included him using his telescopic vision to zoom in on objects from far away distances, specifically to locate Alfred and the Bat Cave. In MOS, I liked how the movie showed Clark using it when he used his telescopic vision to zoom in on Zod's ship floating miles away up in space, when the Kryptonians made their first world-wide broadcast telling the world to hand Clark over. Hope to see more JL centered fics with Supes as the main focus in the future as I liked how you characterize all of the JL members. Also when are you going to write the story about Superman shifting an entire tectonic plate to stop an Earthquake that was posted in a newspaper article in Wallace Keefe's apartment from BVS?
And **sigh** since you're going to give Clark an appetite **grumbles** could you at least PRETTY PLEASE (I'm being extra nice here lol) give him the ability to not needing to breathe at all? As in DCEU Superman doesn't require any form of air/oxygen/breathable atmosphere and simply needs the yellow sun. There's evidence for him not needing to breathe in the DCEU. We saw him floating unconscious in the ocean after rescuing the oil workers in MOS. There was also the time when he was unconscious and on the brink of death floating in space in BVS after being nuked and yet he was restored to 100% full health after the sun shone its rays on his severely weakened body, regardless of the fact there was no oxygen. I cite these two instances because a living being cannot hold their breath while unconscious and would have suffocated in those situations if they required breathing for survival. I especially ask you to include this because I love Superman being able to fly deep into space without requiring oxygen or the need to breathe at all so he can travel to different planets under his own power. How cool would it be if DCEU Superman flew to Mars?! It simply adds to the "awe" factor of Superman. I would love if you wrote a segment with DCEU Superman flying into deep space from Earth into the very center of the sun itself and Clark just reflecting on everything in his life. That would be awesome.
However even if you choose to not follow these suggestions I would be 100% absolutely fine with that and you can always count on me to be an avid follower and reader of your fics. I genuinely love how you write the DCEU verse and I could honestly see many of these events occuring in this universe that Snyder and WB started all the way back in 2013. Keep it up and I can't wait for your next update.
| Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 3 . 2/26
OMG I LOVED THIS.
Also, my first thought after the final line was, “I would have left the light on!” :)
| Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 2 . 2/24
A wonderful story, with so many great moments of character insights and simple-yet-profound love. Thanks for making me smile and for bringing these beloved characters so vividly to life again.
| Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 1 . 2/24
Oh, a lovely first chapter, in *so* many ways! I’m so happy you’re writing this! :)
| Rush Limborg chapter 2 . 2/22
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I don't see how Lois could have missed that Pete etc knew Clark's secret, considering her investigation in Man of Steel, but aside from that, it's a great look into Martha's PIC.
BTW, I forgot to mention this, last chapter...but the ONE thing I wished it included was the lines in the cornfield sequence we saw in the trailer, but cut from the film. "I'll take that as a yes." "...What?" "The ring."
| jwill21 chapter 2 . 2/21
As usual great chapter! Also I'm pretty sure that Lois' "military source" was General Swanwick from MoS and BVS. Nice reference. Hope to see more of them throughout your writing! I need more chapters! Plus it would be great if we could get a chapter from Superman's POV as he recovers his suit and then flies to Russia and the ensuing JL battle against Steppenwolf. That would be awesome to read! Also grrrrrr Superman shouldn't have to eat :p ! Just let him fly into space so he can recharge from the sun and be 100%! Please update soon and I've said this many times but I love your writing!
| JamesTKent chapter 2 . 2/21
Marvelous! I can see just how this happened. You have a gift for that.
| JamesTKent chapter 1 . 2/20
Wow! That one tugged at the heartstrings, Well done!
| Rush Limborg chapter 1 . 2/19
I...LOVE THIS! You should be truly proud of how you filled in the blanks, for these scenes in the film. Lois's conflict is so intense, and heartfelt. Well done.
| jwill21 chapter 1 . 2/18
Great chapter! Really loved this piece and so glad to see that you're back writing! Please update soon and how did you like the prequel comics in the links I PM'd you a while back?
Can't wait for more of your writing!