Reviews for As She Lies Dying! by Theadosia57
silversimon chapter 1 . 6/12
Thanks for sharing another of your wonderful stories! This was a fun tidbit.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27
Love it, please continue this
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22
Like your Bella. Love how they calm each other down.
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 2/23
Enjoyed your story! I liked how Bella managed to outsmart them all! Especially Edward.

Good luck with the contest!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20
Wonderful story! Thanks!
Achtungbebe chapter 1 . 2/21
I loved your Bella! Great story.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
I like this one. The way things happened were perfect for the Bella you created. Well done!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18
You should continue this.
jen5795 chapter 1 . 2/20
That was sooo good. I'd really love to see this expanded.
Debbi84 chapter 1 . 2/20
Loved it!
it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 2/19
I really liked this. Bella was certainly resourceful in changing herself.
Hope that Edward & Alice receive proper punishment
kinnik chapter 1 . 2/19
So good. I would love to see this continued!
grandmachix chapter 1 . 2/19
I wonder if Edward and Alice are mates. Or just angry children. Maybe a few decades in Italy will help them grow up.
Judy
pegasus5406 chapter 1 . 2/19
Yeah! What a great story, I loved it...thanks for sharing hon...huggs. Peggy
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 2/19
That was an unexpectedly different take on things, with an amazingly resourceful Bella. A perfect example of the saying 'all's fair in love and war'.
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