Reviews for Brandon Stark: The Wolf of the North |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully you will return to this story in the future I have enjoyed it so far. Maybe Cordelia Chase could have been reborn as Ashara Dayne and being reunited with Brandon Stark Ashara starts to remember her past life as Cordelia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() an Air Force of war ballons that drop explosives from well out of arrow or ballistae range could be great. as well there could be transport ballons and paratroopers who drop behind or onto city walls with parashoots in order to take a city gate and open it for an army. also its possible to make wooden submarines with westeros level of technology which can submerge 5-10 meters and have a ballistae or sharp ram mounted for sinkiny ships at dock. its also possible to implement watch towers and morse code flicking lights (you have a fire on top with light enhanced with a mirror and pull a lever to cover and uncover the light to make a flicker in morse code to the next watchtower. they could transmit each way and send messages across the north nearly instantly. it could be done cheaply if using hills and mountains only and ravens to cross flat land that would require too many watchtowers. it would be useful for trade offers, postal messages, logistics, news, weather, bureaucracy and military communications |
![]() ![]() ![]() grey wolfs head for memebers of house stark migh not be the best idea. because in war they will be an obvious high priority target. there's a reason soldiers don't salut officers in warzones and they wear the same uniform |
![]() ![]() ![]() please complete the story bro |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story and was really hoping that it was going to the completeed |
![]() ![]() Groan schon wieder diese verrückte dany mit Jon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope this is continued one day because I love this! Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In reality, his aspirations to copy books from the citadel would fail. It would take him a lot longer to copy a book using the printing press than simply writing it by hand. The printing press is for making copies of the same book over and over after creating a template for that book. It is not for copying many different books. |
![]() ![]() ![]() moreeeeeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story and it is I think abandoned. I hope you will continue this. thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() meh he just let it go for a whore seduce tactic? bruhhhhhh |
![]() ![]() ![]() meh casting for ashara is garbage |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have invested soo much thought in the story so please complete it. |
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