Reviews for A Rival Romance
Cemsay chapter 13 . 6/29/2018
Bonnie’s going to walk in on them tonight or tomorrow morning.
Wilde306 chapter 13 . 6/29/2018
I LOVE VIVIENNE SOOOOOOOO MUCH! Expertly done my friend! The way she figured it out couldn't have been more perfect and I love how she is toying with Nick to figure out if its true or not. While at the same time reassuring him that it would be fine with them. I'm loving this story more and more. Seriously can't wait to see what happens next!
nightwolf65 chapter 13 . 6/29/2018
Busted! bahahahahaha!
AStoryTellerBook chapter 13 . 6/29/2018
And now Nick knows that's she knows he's hiding her.
BeecroftA chapter 13 . 6/29/2018
I smirked so much while reading this chapter, Mrs. Wilde's craftiness was just delicious. She clearly supports her son and wants to let him tell about Judy in his own time, but she's also bored, and messing with his head is the perfect remedy for that. Not only is that both really funny and well-set up, but it's also just what the Nick from the movie would have done.

Love this story, keep up the good work!
Sapperjoe85 chapter 13 . 6/29/2018
Found his porn stash. So much for that attempt to throw her off. So now his mom 'nose' I wonder if she'll tell her husband. Would be funny to see him react to her telling him.
Bluelighthouse chapter 13 . 6/29/2018
Wonder who the centerfold of those magazines was. :P

Another amazing chapter! Loved the realization moment. Also loved how Nick's mom wanted to tease her son.

Keep up the amazing work bud!
imjustlikehumphery chapter 12 . 6/23/2018
Great chapter fox, keep it up! Well Nick and Judy's relationship just got a bit more serious with those three mouthed words from him at the end after her race at the school track meet. Before that though he was almost discovered by Bonnie while she was puttin away some of Judy's clothes. Like Nick said luckly she didn't see his clothes on the other side of the bed. I just wonder when all is revealed, how Bonnie and especially Stu let alone her family will react to her and Nick's love for each other. Down the line I wonder if he'll join her at the ZPD like in the movie? Love what Sharla said to that arrogant doe though before the meet started. Can't wait for the next chapter!
MrAndersIversen chapter 12 . 6/23/2018
What another wonderful chapter! You keep on rolling then in like it was kids stuff! Please keep it up and update ASAP! ;)

Sincerely your Danish friend, MrAndersIversen :)
Ande883 chapter 12 . 6/22/2018
How Bonnie didn't find Nick or his clothes is beyond me. Good for Nick, but at the same time, I think Nick missed something very important. Judy flat out said that she was tired of hiding their relationship, and he thought of it as nothing but a misunderstanding of what he said. She is so done with the whole secret of their relationship that it makes me wonder if she will be able to last much longer. I have a good feeling that things will come out sooner rather than later, and I will be perfectly ok with that!

-Ande
PH98 chapter 12 . 6/21/2018
Please add more chapters soon as possible i really like that story
TwilightHexe chapter 12 . 6/21/2018
great chapter. can't wait for next uploaf.
FirnenOne chapter 12 . 6/21/2018
What I really love of this story, is that there isn't a big goal in it, there aren't any dark and dangerous villains, or a very complicated background, just the characters dealing with their day to day problems, the situations in wich they found themselves from time to time are really funny and enjoyable to read, and the way you write and tell us the story is really good too! :)

Glad to read more of your storys again :D
Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps chapter 12 . 6/20/2018
A wonderful chapter! A close call for Nick and an amazing race for Judy. Hopefully her other races go as well as her first.

You've created a wonderful world for these characters to be in. They interact with so many others and it just makes the world explode with life. A treat job on that so keep up the wonderful work! And keep Bonnie around. I can't wait to see what she thinks of this when their relationship is discovered. XD And this O'Hare is an interesting rival. I wonder who will be Nick's rival in soccer. I'm kind of hoping on a non speciest bunny and a friendly rival since most are a hit more antagonistic. Whatever happens though, this story has me hooked!
RecklesslyExtravagant chapter 12 . 6/20/2018
Eh, it was aiight. Im like 1000% sure Boonie would have noticed the clothes, and her comment suggests she did. I have no doubt, later it will be revealed that she said that BECAUSE she knew "someone" was in the bed. Am I right, yea Im totally right.
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