Reviews for For the Win, or |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The hard separation was not necessarily a permanent one... and passengers can re-link. It's likely not even as traumatic as second-triggers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...What game did they tie it into? Missile command would be too easy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda a mid story. Like, the usage of HR was very contrived imo. Contessa's power should have been able to do the same thing, especially when she asked "how to get an army to beat Zion" The whole team-up idea would have appeared there. Also, Leet is kinda powerwanked here, I sincerely doubt he could build something like this. This fic kinda reminds me of the Harry Potter fics where they construct an entire sttrawman (i.e. Ginny dosing Harry with love potion) in order to bash a character lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that last line was QA saying: "nope. not doing this shit. i want my Taylor back. and none of you fucks will stop me" its absolutly adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending reminds me of one of the X-men movies where Magneto moves a chess piece after losing his powers. Good writing, thanks. |
![]() ![]() You're a terrible person for that ending, and I hate you. ... Alright, fine, it wasn't THAT bad. |
![]() ![]() WOW. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A much smarter way to handle everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooooh, nice ending :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha, I love the hinting at the end about how QA was like "Best Host! I'm back!" at the end. That was rather adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Insert dramatic music in that ending haha. Good stuff :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was fitting. Also a pretty fair method of resolving that glaring issue. Well done and quite lovely, thank you for that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting take on the epic Worm tale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice one-shot, good work. |