|Reviews for Swords and Roses
| Regtech chapter 29 . 2/15
Yeah... giving harry apparition, legilimence and him being supposed to be smart and experienced made the last few chapters hard to stomach. Especially how he left the north to fend for itself.
He keeps burning resources and time, when has more urgent things to attend. How he cares so much about family when he barely knows them and they were willing to throw Harry under the bus for their ambitions. Even after reality slapped them in the face and he got them out, they still went back to get repeatedly slapped
| Regtech chapter 28 . 2/15
Is his "family" even worth it at this point? They have backstabbed him again and again, betrayed him over and over, he has given one opportunity after another to back off, but no. Holy crap, he barely even knows them! They might as well be strangers to him
| Saldur chapter 25 . 1/21
This shit is good as fuck dude, kudos to you. Ive read 25 chapters today alone, much joy for your writing.
| Guest chapter 35 . 1/18
Just finished. Thank you for your wonderfull story. Its been great reading it.
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/16
Harry NOT taking some of the IRON BORN TREASUREY. LOOKS VERY WRONG and very SUSPICIOUS.? HE SHOULD HAVE TAKEN HIS SHARE . SO ALL THE LORDS THAT FOLLOWED HIM WOULD BE THE SAME. GETTING EQUA SHARES IN THE TREASURE. IT looks Like to some HE MUST HAVE TAKEN SOMETHING MORE VALUABLE FROM THE IRON BORN BUT IS NOT SHARING IT.? HARRY SHOULD ALWAYS MAKE PEOPLE..VALUE HIS EFFORT HE PUTTS INTO HELPING PEOPLE. NOT JUST EXPECT HIM TO GIVE AWAY VALUABLE THINGS. HIS VAULTS MAYBE FULL BUT THERES ALWAYS EXPANTION RUNES LAYLINES. THE IRON BANK TO STORE MONEY. INVESTMENTS INTHE REBUILDING OF THAT OTHER CITY. TO SPREAD HIS POWER BASE FURTHER. Thank you for listening to my message. Love most of the story. Think Harry needs to value his own effort a bit more though. Haven't seen much rune work.?
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/14
When is harry going to learn the WATER MAGIC he got from the land of stonemen.? FROM THE PENCIEVE MEMORY VAULT.?
| Silky Button chapter 35 . 1/8
wow... that was (possibly) better than your Hadrian Lannister story... maybe ;)
Both are beyond amazing
thank you for sharing
| Igniferroque chapter 33 . 1/7
Way to plan ahead! Didn’t see Cersei’s method of punishment coming but it was a good one.
| Igniferroque chapter 24 . 1/7
Except for the obvious difficulties, negating Harry by marrying Loras to Cersei would be smart on Tywin’s part. Thank you for writing the story.
| Immaterium chapter 15 . 12/29/2023
I understand that it is for the sake of the story however Harry could simply make Littlefinger and the like "disappear" and save himself a lot of trouble. Anyway great story, I very much enjoy it so far and hope to see dragons soon
| MrTurnt chapter 18 . 12/28/2023
Im sorry in trying so hard to be patient but everything harry does irritates me. He is either forced to do something by various means and just accepts it passively or reacts to people attacking him. Not once has he made an actual choice or decision with being blackmailed or attacked or forced. He has no backbone whatsoever and for someone who supposedly wanted to be free is quick to bow and take commands from litterally everyone
| lx chapter 35 . 12/27/2023
all good except that the romance aspect of the novel so disorienting, you mentioned how he will take care of them and love them equally but never since the birth chapter are they mentioned.
| gryphan.master900 chapter 35 . 12/27/2023
I think I'd leave Danny's kingdom to fall with her death and the dragons to fly into the wilds and be free and potentially create a new population of wild dragons.
Trying to fold her kingdom into theirs isn't worth the effort in the slightest, keeping the 'Three Sisters' and the surrounding lands along with their current continent is far more work than anyone wants to deal with, adding a kingdom on the other side of the Dothraki Sea and the Red Wastes Desert is complete folly. Transportation of troops, fleets and supplies in times of inevitable war with the Dothraki would be a logistical nightmare and a dragon can't deal with every small raid group attacking villages and farms, the only option is a strong military and if the Yitish want to conquer past the Red Mountains they won't be able to win a war of attrition and subterfuge against the Yitish without extensive military and commercial imports.
The Bay of Dragons is a massive drain of time, energy, troops, and resources to bother with for the Westeros Empire and their Essos Vassals and allies. It's a nightmarish investment and letting it fall with her death is by far the most practical move. Danny is barking up the wrong tree if they think about this logically.
| lx chapter 16 . 12/27/2023
honestly his lack of care for other girls compare to targerean it would have been good if his only girl was targerean, moreeover that muc children is absurd
| Immaterium chapter 7 . 12/27/2023
Gaining much needed knowledge and experience in the "Art of War" in Yi Ti for the wars to come - quite fitting. I very much enjoyed it