|Reviews for Mystery Dungeons and Ancient Vaults|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16
Well, it could have been a cool idea. But there wasn't any build-up for getting to know any of the characters. I don't usually attempt to read OCs. This one just looked interesting because of the whole, a human (who are thought to have gone extinct) not transforming into a pokemon after crossing over into the PMD world.
| Brotherhood of the Grim chapter 1 . 3/1
| Crystalline Void chapter 1 . 2/28
Interesting idea. I like how smoothly your story flows, as well as how you give each of Martin's Pokemon their own personalities. The whole Warrior linking thing is still a bit confusing, but I'm sure I'll learn more about it in time. All in all, I'm looking forward to more!