I just did a two-day reread of this story and it is as good as I remember it. Absolutely love the lore you've crafted from the Judeo-Christian mythos, and how it affects and changes the MHA world.

Hope you're doing well, and I look forward to seeing future updates.

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Yeah this is the point where I can’t keep myswlf from commenzing and I say Sir Tryhard of Edgelordia will make a fine addition to my collection of gaming burns

Liar It wasn't in fact and if

This was the best chapter yet i can't wait for the next one , rest well and have a great day.

I love your writing, but damn. The pacing of the fic is way too slow, like, I understand wanting to build suspense before revealing things. But 27 chapters in, and we still don't know much?

Also, it's quite repetitive, really. Like, something happens, Izuku unleashes Nemesis and bam, people are afraid. And since the beginning it's been that ad hominem.

I would've have loved to continue reading, but I can't. Because I'm not reading more chapters where it's the same thing over and over.

Ps: Inko hiding important plot-relevant info for no reason? Even when it causes shit to happen to her supposed dearly loved son? Worse mother ever.

Shame it's been so long since the last update.

I KNEW IT! IT WILL BE IBARA WHO IS ONE OF THE FUCKING FAITHFUL

Oh shot, New plot has been dropped

shitty Izuku character

Hey man, been a long time since I commented but I just reread the story and I still love it, just wanted you to know, hope you can return to this one day with the passion you want.

don't use the lords name in vain

This... was nice. It was good at a time but reading it seemed to make me tired. And it's due to one simple fact. MC. Who's the mc? Is it shinsou or Izuku? because honestly, I'm not sure. Izuku character development was just a massive leap. For a while he acted like a pussy, the next, he acted arrogant though he was quickly out down.

But shinsou? The guy has more character development than the damn mc. The way you hype the guy is much more serious than the supposed mc.

It reminds me of black clover, how the author favour ASTA more than yuno( if you think I'm playing just look at yuno abilities, even his very lineage).

It's the same here. Son of Lucifer. So what. it's more of a title than anything. Shinsou has done and achieved more than Izuku has, and now it seems like bruh is even gonna be stronger than the celestials.

I thought Izuku was gonna go to hell and learn how to fucking LEAD. And be ALONE. Yet you shoved shinsou into it. Not only that, Izuku has basically taken bakugous place as the fucking idiot and he's worse.

Thank God I'm done with this. I can't keep reading. If you read this, try to make your mc the ACTUAL MC, and not some side character that lets someone else shine. Let their development happen in different places, not shoving one or the other in one situation or smth.

I wanted Izuku to be alone in hell, or maybe hawks be with him. Let him learn to settle matters on his own and not rely on every one for everything.

The way it's going I won't be surprised if shinsou becomes the ruler of hell, maybe due his charisma or some shit like that.

What I'm trying to say is, let Izuku have his own character development arc that will make him be responsible, someone who the denizens of hell will respect. ALONE. Not with shinsou. but you ruined that.

Bye, never coming back. Fic was beautifully written, one of the best I've read, infact, only thing that annoys me is that Izuku isn't independent.

Make your mc, the mc

This... was nice. It was good at a time but reading it seemed to make me tired. And it's due to one simple fact. MC. Who's the mc? Is it shinsou or Izuku? because honestly, I'm not sure. Izuku character development was just a massive leap. For a while he acted like a pussy, the next, he acted arrogant though he was quickly out down.

But shinsou? The guy has more character development than the damn mc. The way you hype the guy is much more serious than the supposed mc.

It reminds me of black clover, how the author favour ASTA more than yuno( if you think I'm playing just look at yuno abilities, even his very lineage).

It's the same here. Son of Lucifer. So what. it's more of a title than anything. Shinsou has done and achieved more than Izuku has, and now it seems like bruh is even gonna be stronger than the celestials.

I thought Izuku was gonna go to hell and learn how to fucking LEAD. And be ALONE. Yet you shoved shinsou into it. Not only that, Izuku has basically taken bakugous place as the fucking idiot and he's worse.

Thank God I'm done with this. I can't keep reading. If you read this, try to make your mc the ACTUAL MC, and not some side character that lets someone else shine. Let their development happen in different places, not shoving one or the other in one situation or smth.

I wanted Izuku to be alone in hell, or maybe hawks be with him. Let him learn to settle matters on his own and not rely on every one for everything.

The way it's going I won't be surprised if shinsou becomes the ruler of hell, maybe due his charisma or some shit like that.

What I'm trying to say is, let Izuku have his own character development arc that will make him be responsible, someone who the denizens of hell will respect. ALONE. Not with shinsou. but you ruined that.

Bye, never coming back. Fic was beautifully written, one of the best I've read, infact, only thing that annoys me is that Izuku isn't independent.

Make your mc, the mc

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