Reviews for Harry Potter and Libromancy
thundercats2014 chapter 1 . 1/5/2021
This story was phenomenal. I loved what you have done with it and would love to see a sequel or another version of it. If you have any suggestions of stories similar to it please let me know! Thanks for the amazing read.
Cyril Kain chapter 10 . 11/2/2020
In the comics, the Arc Reactors are called R.T Nodes.
Cyril Kain chapter 6 . 11/2/2020
Actually, Harry's parents would be in their thirties when they died. They were born when Sirius was, and he was born in the early to mid nineteen fifties. Even lowballing it has them being 29 when they died.
AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 10/15/2020
Another amusing chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 10/15/2020
Definitely an amusing first chapter
reddir chapter 14 . 10/15/2020
Great story!

It really reads like 3 parts to me.

1) the first part, learning to use his Libromancy powers and everything around that.
2) the second part, crossover with Wheel of Time - amazing crossover, would work so very well as a standalone, best I've seen of this pairing.
3) the last bit, where he goes to Hogwarts. It is mostly pointless for anything other than keeping it "Harry Potter" by keeping Hogwarts as something important.
Archleone chapter 14 . 8/20/2020
As amusing as the concept for this story was, the execution was kind of dog shit.

It sort of shat the bed and became a wankfest of porn choose your own adventure bullshit where tons of people can turn into girls and choose to stay that way, most everyone around Harry is a massive slut and will fuck anything, etc.

Harry himself doesn't have any sort of meaningful relationships because his Nymph is an OC that basically took over his agency the moment she entered the story and turned him into a sex fiend. Then Hermione-the-Mostly-Lesbian enters the story and takes things further off the rails by basically making everything about her. See: The random as fuck and unnecessary slut twins that look like Harry that only seem to exist for Hermione to constantly have lesbian sex with, while Harry watches like some kind of sad cuckold.

And it just kept getting worse and spiraling out of control until Harry let a literal demon into his world with no kind of leash or oversight, the story randomly veered into being a WoT crossover, and Harry was basically written out of his own story for a decade. The consolation prize of "something something time machine and now everyone has alternative memories they can choose to remember" is really not enough to make up for it. Everyone essentially got to live a fantasy life of doing basically whatever they wanted for years and Harry was left out completely until the wanky "but actually maybe not" move at the end.

I think this story would have been a lot better if the only deviancy was from Harry and his Nymph. And if Hermione stayed out of the story, and if his parents stayed dead. Obviously, I think the twins were a waste of space as well. I mean, they were ruined from the outset because they were clearly just Hermione being a selfish slut wanting more slutty girls around her for her own pleasure. There was never an actual decent reason for making them and there wasn't any particularly useful purpose for them in the story. Like, ever. They never did anything of note besides fuck Hermione. And their entire backstory is them getting fucked and raped and mutilated constantly which is also just fucked up and shitty. I assume you're one of those sad sacks who lurk in the reddit board for "nsfw cyoa" and jerk your dick bloody to all the "you become a girl and get raped by anything with a pulse or even sometimes things without" trash that infests that place.

Anyway, if the only perverts were Harry and his pet fairy, then at least the "surrounding" story wouldn't have come off as mind-meltingly stupid. Like, if everyone reacted like normal people but Harry still dragged them to healing temples dedicated to a sex goddess because that's normal to him. The current way it's all written is very masturbatory and lacking any sort of depth or... anything really. Basically every adult character sounds the same because they're all weirdly accepting and also veer closer to being slutty than not. This isn't helped by everyone being turned into "13yr old girls" that everyone, including all the adult men, find "very cute" with their tits that are too big for their age and their nudity and whatnot. Harry finding that appealing makes sense. He's like 11. Men who are older than 30 agreeing seems a lot less okay. And maybe you don't care. Hell, I wouldn't care if it wasn't for everything else piling on top of it. It makes me a lot less willing to accept one odd characteristic when there's just so much else bringing the story down.

The WoT stuff seemed entirely pointless because there was never a particularly interesting or impactful result to the initial reason they went to that world in the first place. It somehow changed from building a superior civilization of magical people to instead being about over-prepping to "Fix it fic" up the WoT plotline.

In some ways, this story highlights what I hate the most about stories like it. Stories where the main character gets this strange, niche, potentially OP power but instead of using it for their own benefit and keeping it a secret, they spread it around and essentially get ordered around to satisfy all their friend, family, and other randos nearby.

Maybe one of the first examples I read of that kind of bullshit was The Gamer. Korean kid ends up with this bullshit gaming-styled leveling power and he ends up just being a way for the people around him to power up and get new magical items for free.

Sure, maybe this is meant to be a comedy or a crack fic, but it's still pretty bad and could have been better while still being crackish or comedic. All while still keeping the smutty angle and the world travel and all that, but you over-indulged in loli lesbian sex and ruined much of it. There only ever really needs to be one source of deviancy and insanity. You made too many and it stopped being interesting.
Gvagore chapter 1 . 8/5/2020
You trying to sexualise children is fucking disgusting and you should seek help for your deranged mindset.
harryandhermione43v3r chapter 9 . 7/12/2020
this story started out good but got ridiculously stupid as I read more of it.
zelot65 chapter 14 . 5/12/2020
that was surprisingly epic, and basically my childhood fantasies turned into a book. well, minus the sex, but then I'm gay and the sex was straight (or lesbian) so that's rather expected. Also surprisingly tolerable and vaguely impressive, seeing as it didn't come off as smut despite the rather enormous amount of sex, so good job.
DontMindMe chapter 14 . 4/16/2020
I love all of your harry potter stories.
It is impressive how you manage to a level of adult and sex with out it becoming smut.
shugokage chapter 14 . 3/25/2020
Definitely an interesting story good job!
Jacob Fritzsching chapter 14 . 3/15/2020
Please make a sequel soon!
kessu91 chapter 14 . 2/6/2020
Yeah the perfect realization that he just got left behind and has nothing in common with anyone of them anymore with nice recounting of their new non damaged children and new lovers and new lives he has no part in. Oh but here we have a convenient tool that can create a set of fake memories for everyone so we can pretend like abandoning him was okay after all... This was absolute trash seriously. 3 chapters of a 11 year BOY fixing everything alone while they enjoy themselves in a new world and then it ends with Harry the supposed MC of the novel apologizing for being childish because he felt left out and abandoned and then they just never speak of it again while not one of them actually showing any remorse or giving any form of apology for basically choosing a life without him...
kessu91 chapter 12 . 2/6/2020
Im sorry but this is fucking trash... I mean what the fuck? They just stayed behind? All of his girls will will be ADULTS while hes a CHILD and they have 9 fucking years of living in another world without him. And then what? Your going to pretend like it means nothing? This just ruined everything up to this point. A neglected abused child and they just told him to fuck off since they like some adventure? Now their entire teenage to maturity will be lived without him and theyll have fucking nothing in common anymore! This is like your other novels honestly you might as well cut of Harry from the story since clearly his nothing but a convenient tool to make everyone else get what they what...
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