Reviews for Child Borne of Spring
Zsombi chapter 8 . 5/1
Wow.. what a yesman character. It was great until now but I just can't stand this type. Even after pieceing together that very likely someone in the leadership wanted to off her, or at least ruin her previous life .. and since all she had contact with was Danzo's troupe, the logical conclusion is that he's the culprit... she still just goes along with it. Finally, what Danzo told her in the dungeon is basically blatant treason.. there's no overruling of the Hokage's orders, especially not by someone who isn't even an advisor to the man.

I don't understand what do ohers like about stories and characters like this, both are (even in a world of fiction) unrealistic rubbish.
ElleVane chapter 13 . 12/18/2022
Amazing story. I don't think I've had any other story hit me in the way that this one has.
Guest chapter 13 . 10/10/2022
Omg the author left the story in a cliff hopefully you update it one day
Guest chapter 13 . 7/17/2022
Amazing. Very well written. I read this in 4 hours.

I absolutely live your writing style!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/14/2022
Okay I really like this story and it’s honestly been a long time since I’ve been this stuck but for the love of god, update. I don’t wanna pressure and all that but you ended AT A CLIFFHANGER! you gotta know how much damage that can cause me.
getalife1000 chapter 8 . 3/23/2022
NO
getalife1000 chapter 7 . 3/23/2022
ah yes. Hiruzen included
getalife1000 chapter 7 . 3/23/2022
friggin danzo
getalife1000 chapter 4 . 3/23/2022
"she could bang a silver haired hottie" sounds familiar?
getalife1000 chapter 3 . 3/23/2022
honesty, I don't see what itachi sees in these people. Those fuckers pushed one of their own to suicide and I'm so pissed.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2022
Aw I love Gai and Dai. That's a wonderful family imo
flow3rchild21 chapter 13 . 1/5/2022
amazing story, hope you update soon.
mickeysofine chapter 11 . 1/3/2022
This is good change.

Now you should remove all the Danzo parts and forced drama.

You'd have a good five chapter story at this point, instead of eleven chapters of mediocrity.
mickeysofine chapter 10 . 1/3/2022
Maybe some more scenes of Danzo stroking a cat while lounging on a throne?
Or maybe laughing maniacally?

Have him go the Inuzuka clan compound to kick a few puppies, just in case.
mickeysofine chapter 9 . 1/3/2022
Forced drama like nothing else.
I bet you Minato is going to save her so the SI can metaphorically suck his "perfect character" dick, like all the other characters.
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