Reviews for Child Borne of Spring |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow.. what a yesman character. It was great until now but I just can't stand this type. Even after pieceing together that very likely someone in the leadership wanted to off her, or at least ruin her previous life .. and since all she had contact with was Danzo's troupe, the logical conclusion is that he's the culprit... she still just goes along with it. Finally, what Danzo told her in the dungeon is basically blatant treason.. there's no overruling of the Hokage's orders, especially not by someone who isn't even an advisor to the man. I don't understand what do ohers like about stories and characters like this, both are (even in a world of fiction) unrealistic rubbish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. I don't think I've had any other story hit me in the way that this one has. |
![]() ![]() Omg the author left the story in a cliff hopefully you update it one day |
![]() ![]() Amazing. Very well written. I read this in 4 hours. I absolutely live your writing style! |
![]() ![]() Okay I really like this story and it’s honestly been a long time since I’ve been this stuck but for the love of god, update. I don’t wanna pressure and all that but you ended AT A CLIFFHANGER! you gotta know how much damage that can cause me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah yes. Hiruzen included |
![]() ![]() ![]() friggin danzo |
![]() ![]() ![]() "she could bang a silver haired hottie" sounds familiar? |
![]() ![]() ![]() honesty, I don't see what itachi sees in these people. Those fuckers pushed one of their own to suicide and I'm so pissed. |
![]() ![]() Aw I love Gai and Dai. That's a wonderful family imo |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story, hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good change. Now you should remove all the Danzo parts and forced drama. You'd have a good five chapter story at this point, instead of eleven chapters of mediocrity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe some more scenes of Danzo stroking a cat while lounging on a throne? Or maybe laughing maniacally? Have him go the Inuzuka clan compound to kick a few puppies, just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Forced drama like nothing else. I bet you Minato is going to save her so the SI can metaphorically suck his "perfect character" dick, like all the other characters. |