I think people misunderstood something in this story, I might be wrong, but with obi-wan-kenobi, I think it mainly was written as a unreliable pov, most of what we hear is via darth Vader’s pov, so of course, he would be unfair to him, I think the author was going for a story where, darth Vader was unreliable, he wasn’t perfect, some of his decisions may not have been the best, but helped the whole time, but again, I may just be looking to far into it, it’s fanfiction after all :)

Impressive writing. Loved the story in it's completion.
Nice conclusion. Thanks for sharing

this seems like a worse written, more monotonous version of the 'vader: hero of naboo' story tbh. idk this is still a good read, but it has some pretty clear issues

Vader was a slave.
A slave to the creation of a peaceful world.
Even so, he took on that burden willingly.
What a beautiful story.
Well done, Mr. Author.

Good chapter!

10/10 first chapter. Vader’s got that antagonist energy down perfectly.

Well it was interesting, i kinda enjoyed, but jedi order bashing looks like sooo stupid, you already have reasons to bash them why you ever create jedi-сonsular issues. But along this and honey trap jedis(really cringe thing, like honey trap kunoichi in naruto) and a little bit fanon stuff, it was fun, shame that only badass epic scene is when Vader make every force users in galaxy shit their pants in his first arrive

If he is so afraid of ruining the timeline, then why doesn’t he think about the fact that it was those actions that he committed that led him to “rebirth”? What if he changes something, he will simply dissolve because the event did not happen x

one of the best story i have readed

Fantastic story

Wonderful fuc

Dont mind kenobi dieing , cool chap

Ya not wrong about the jedi concerning anakin

Lovely fight scene

Excellent 1st chap