. should i be reading darth vader’s voice as hayden or JEJ?

I do have to agree with the many other readers/commenters that Vader has no good, or logical reason to just die in the end? Nor has Past Anakin himself doesn't have any "real" reason to kill Vader anyways?

Especially after everything Vader did to change the timeline for the better.

Plus, you also really don't like Obi-Wan very much? I mean look, we can all agree that he wasn't the best good teacher/master for Anakin, since Qui-Gon was supposed to.

BUT, nobody is perfect.

Especially NOT Darth Vader, after all the messed up atrocities he did beforehand. So, Even after he already changes his own fate, and everybody else for the better, he should give past Obi-Wan a slightest of chance?

And speaking about Qui-Gon, Why isn't he very upset to Darth Vader for killing his former apprentice like that!?

Oh this is really...something. There are quite a few parts I like but overall this is just not great.

The comically over the top bashing of the Jedi and Obi Wan in particular just ruins this story. Plus the whitewashing of Vader's actions.

1000 tears is plenty of time for change

Crappu ending and the duel was terribly short and their was no true readom for Vader to actully die

shit

here is a idea for a Star Wars and Sekirei crossover story part 2 of 2

after Anakin and Ahsoka left Yume got up and went to check on Musubi and found that she was just fine then Karasuba woke up and demand where they are and went out to find them Yume took Musubi in her arms and went after her she saw Karasuba question the head researcher in where Anakin and Ahsoka went he told her that they went to the loading dock then Yume got a call from Takami asking how the mission went after Yume told her that they have Musubi Takami told them that Minaka has ordered to destroy the lab and kill everyone in it which Karasuba was gladly to do while Yume took Musubi to the loading dock after letting Matsu and the others know where to pick them up which she, Musubi and Karasuba boarded the helicopter and leave the underground lads before they blow up a few minutes later

when Yume, Karasuba, Matsu and Kazehana returned with Musubi to the M.B.I. they saw all the systems were shut down when they ask what had happened Takami that someone hacked their systems and downloaded everything form servers Matsu told her that's impossible because she had personally designed the security system herself Takami says that the hacker was using a unknown program they had never seen before and that it hacked their systems in a just few seconds like it wasn't even there to begin with and with that Matsu saw a chance to stick it to Minaka for what he did and was planning to do to her fellow Sekirei in his game he would start in a few years

meanwhile Anakin, Padme, Ahsoka, R2 and 3PO have landed their ship the Twilight somewhere in the dessert and cover it with a dessert colored tarp to hid it from view and they are all now reading over everything that R2 has downloaded from the M.B.I. satellite that they need to know about the planet the learned it's called Earth and when they get to the M.B.I., the Sekirei, and Minaka's plans for the Sekirei Plan and they were not happy about it so they are planning out a plan to throw this madman's insane game for the Sekirei off track and save a alien race form his clutches

from there they decided to make it happen they would start up a high tech company called Skywalker Enterprises that makes very high advance technology like droids, medical machines, advance weapons and vehicles in Shinto Teito in Japan where that the MBI is also located that will help provide them with the money they will need to help with their plans there they will also first team up with Sekirei 01 Miya who lives in a inn called the Izumo Inn where they all can live, hide and train to stop Minaka's insane game and Anakin even suggest that he and Ahsoka would to drop the whole forbidden rule about attachments and marriages when Ahsoka asks why he explains that the chance will be great that some of these Sekireis will bond to them as well if they have a reaction to them

and so they move to Japan and put the first stage of their plan in action and meet up withe Miya they would also later repair and upgrade both HK and T3 to help them with their plans with HK becoming Padme's new bodyguard and their secret assassin when need it to take out someone that can escape justice and is too dangerous to live and T3 helping R2 with programing, information gathering and maintenance

meanwhile in the Star Wars Universe the Clone Wars continues Sidious planned to let war continue for longer in the hopes of find Anakin in order for him to turn Anakin to the Dark Side or to find a replacement for him Obi-wan got himself a new apprentice (his name is up to you) who Sidious poison his mind with lies to later turn him to the Dark Side and he becomes Darth Vader instead of Anakin to starts his plan to end the Jedi and turn the Republic into his Empire

When Order 66 was finally given out the Jedi could evacuate the Temple thanks to a Vision from Yoda to save all the Younglings, Padawans and elders from the Temple with many Temple Guards, Knights and Master dieing in the process while across the universe some Jedi were barely to escape with their lives while Obi-wan confronted his former apprentice and they had their fight on Mustafar where Sidious placed him inside the Darth Vader Suit the Jedi Council Members who survived (that's up to you) decided to hid that all the surviving Jedi should hid on the Jedi Planet Tython and help the future Rebel Leaders to fight against the Empire

to find Anakin, Padme, Ahsoka, R2 and 3PO use the end of the game Star Wars Fallen Order where the Mantis Crew who was send out by the Jedi Council to get the Holocron with the list of all Force Sensitive Children that Jedi Master Cordova had hidden from the Empire and when they looked at the list they saw a lot of Skywalker names on the list and their location on Earth thinking that they could find their lost fiends there and that could help them turn the tide of the war with the Empire into their favor and set out to Earth

when they arrived they see armed space stations Starships a mixture of both Star Wars and Halo Universes but better and improved all made by Skywalker Enterprises who had even build a Jedi Temple on Earth where that both Anakin and Ahsoka were training all the Force Sensitive Children of Earth and their kids into Gray Jedi

which Sekirei get parred up with Anakin for his harem next to Padme is up to you

for a pairing idea I would like to see Ahsoka being paired up with Sekirei member 05 Mutsu instead of that spoiled brat Mikogami Hayato

for inspiration read the story Grey Ashikabi from spart1339

I just give you the idea how you use it is up to you

here is a idea for a Star Wars and Sekirei crossover story part 1 of 2

Anakin Skywalker, Padme Amidala, Ahsoka Tano, R2D2 and C-3PO have just boarded the Twilight after that both Anakin, Ahsoka and R2 had rescued both Padme and 3PO from a Separatist Battle Ship under the command of General Grievous but as the head back to the Republic fleets of both Anakin and Obi-wan a stray laser bolt from the Separatist Battle Ship hits the Twilight's hyperdrive systems which not only damages the navi computer but also activated the hyperdrive which send them all on a wild ride through hyperspace with no clear destination at all

after some hours our heroes have finally managed to shut down the hyperdrive and they found themselves in the Earth's universe many light years away form their own universe a few miles away form planet Earth in the same year where Musubi was kidnapped in they send R2 out to one of the satellites owned by the M.B.I. for him to hack into it and download everything he can find about the planet

while this was happening Takami was on the phone with Yume as Yume along with Karasuba, Matsu Kazehana were on there way to rescue Musubi form the kidnappers she just finishes her phone call when the alarms went off she runs to the command center and yells what the hell is going on one of the technicians calls out that all their firewalls have been breached and that someone is downloading everything from both the Internet and from the M.B.I.'s servers including both hers and Minaka's private servers making Takami very surprised as this shouldn't have been possible at all as their security system was state of the art and programed by the smartest of Sekireis

Minaka walked in and ask what is happening as doesn't know what is going on after Takami explains to him what is going on and seeing all their files being downloaded and the progress bar that is showing that process is fast approaching towards the end Minaka calls out to the technicians to stop the download which one of the technicians responding to him that they can't and that whoever is doing this is using some sort of program they have never seen before and that whoever is doing this is also hacking right through all of their obstacles and roadblock faster then they can put them up and that they are disabling every single one of their hunter killer programs that they have in their arsenal and is also neutralizing all of their computer viruses they have send out to the source in order to try and stop the download but nothing is working

as the progress bar is now fast approaching the end Takami orders the technicians to shut down all of their servers and take the whole M.B.I. offline as all the technicians rush out quickly to the server room in the basement to shut down all of the M.B.I.'s servers to try and stop the download but they were to late as they had just manage the shut down all of the M.B.I.'s servers R2 had already finished downloading everything just about 15 seconds before the whole M.B.I. went offline with the knowledge of the Sekirei and the tournament that is going to take place in a few years now out there in the hands of unknowns which in Minaka's mind could either ruin everything he had plan for his grand tournament or could add more to it for his excitement he hoped it was the letter and instead of the former

R2 move back to the ship where he found both Anakin and Ahsoka meditating while Padme was enjoining a nice cup of tea given to her by 3PO but Anakin had a vision and in that vision Anakin got a Force call for help from Musubi in trouble and he also senses something else there as well through the Force he moves to the bridge with both Ahsoka, Padme, R2 and 3PO following him when they ask whats the matter he told them some call him for help through the Force and that he also senses something there attuned to the Force as Anakin pilots the Twilight to the lab that holds Musubi Anakin told Padme, R2 and 3PO to stay with the ship and to make sure that the ship is ready for them for a quick pick up when needed it after Anakin and Ahsoka move to the underground labs entrance where they killed one soldier and subdue the 2nd one by using the mind trick on him to get them access to the labs and start their rescue mission to save Musubi

At the same time Yume, Karasuba, Matsu and Kazehana on board with 2 helicopters along with members of a mercenary group bought be Minaka years ago called High Risk Solutions where a few miles away from their way to the lab to rescue Musubi when they arrived at the entrance they saw the death guard and the 2 cut in half rifles done by Lightsabers while Yume and Karasuba down to the labs Matsu, Kazehana stayed with the mercenaries and jumped down the elevator shaft as they exited the elevator they saw all the death and knocked out soldiers in the underground labs

meanwhile Anakin and Ahsoka were moving along the corridors of the labs killing and knocking out guards they come across when they come to the head researcher's office after questioning a guard where the head researcher was after they both got the information out of him where Musubi was Anakin saw 2 Holocrons on a shelf right behind his desk along with 2 old deactivated droids those are the infamous HK-47 and T3-M4 and they took both the Holocrons and droids with them as they use them better then these people when fix up and upgraded when came to the room where Musubi was they both felt through the Force that she was dieing that was when the 2 Holocrons activate themselves and revealed that they are the 2 long lost Holocrons of Jedi Masters Revan and Bastila Shan Bastila tells both Anakin and Ahsoka what to do to heal Musubi in order to save her

some time later Yume and Karasuba arrive where Musubi is being held and they see Anakin and Ahsoka just finish healing Musubi they look at each other Anakin and Ahsoka wanted to leave peacefully and leave Musubi with them as the saw through the Force the meant the girl no harm but thanks to Karasuba who wanted to test her strength against strong opponents attack Anakin which forces Yume to fight against Ahsoka after a short fight both Anakin and Ahsoka won from Yume and Karasuba with Anakin knocking Karasuba out and Ahsoka having pinned Yume down on the floor with one of her lightsabers to her throat Anakin tells her to take of the girl and that they will be on their way after that both he and Ahsoka putting their lightsabers away and left taking the 2 Holocrons and the 2 droids with them calling in Padme, 3PO and R2 to pick them up at the loading docks while sending them the coordinates of the location of where to pick them up from

wow you're not a big fan of Kenobi aren't you

Loved the character though kind of wish Vader would have told him his story and how he is in fact Anakin Skywalker prior to killing him

This was a fun story with a satisfying ending! thank you for sharing it! I have been reading it this whole week and it's a good one.

This was an awesome story.

It wasnt horrible. It was better than average all the way through around 7/10, but i hated that last chapter. There is no logic for anakin beating vader. Unless you made vader not actually try his best and let anakin kill him like what obi wan did in a new hope. But the worst part is you said that he would have to try his best or anakin would never accept it. I understand vader dying; he completed his mission, he had nothing really left to do in the galaxy until the vong showed up. But you couldnt kill him the way you did, i would suggest something similar to how luke died in ep 8 or something. This almost completely ruined the story for me

Dissapointing retarded trash, all the more so because it was pathetically obvious almost from the first chapter, the end was and insult to leave us with, fucking bullshit to send him back in time only to kill him.

Great story tho I don't like how Vader died.