And so more pieces have been placed. Little does Palpatine know that it is not a true Black King that wishes to take him off the chess board, but a grey king who is merely ensuring the next true king of the White is more attuned to what the game creator wanted.

I’m surprised Vader didn’t have one of his people there to talk to the senate

Arrogant fools, why is it that Qui-Gon was the only intelligent one until anakin joined the order?

The author has nothing own his mind now people
I advise we should provide more ideas and plots for our best fanfic over
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You know with his hair, mask, and arm I can picture him being a stand in for the winter soldier before Cap punched the mask off his face

Very very interesting. Darth Vader is awesome, tho I do wonder why he hadn't recorded that conversation he had had with Sidious. That would have shown his true colors easily, and he could have held on to that recording until he needed it.
But anyway, like where this is going. Glad Anakin has the master he should have had all along. The Jedi need to change.
Looking forward to more.

This just proves Obi-wan wasn't ready to be a knight. He had no respect for other beings

Whoo! new update..dont worry i will be patient...for now

Interesting start, now Vader just needs to be careful he doesn’t alter the timeline in a way that the enemy takes advantage earlier than anticipated

You have to continue this story. Very well written. Update please. Hard to find a good fix & this is a damn good one. UPDATE!

Damn good read.

Bloody hell this is good read.

I must say that I love your treatment of Ventress in this altered time line. I hope that as time progresses, she and Quinlan Vos will be lovers again, only this time, both will be Jedi

Great story. Will Vaded have a pairing? If so I suggest Celeste Morne or the Dark Woman.

I just reread this and damn, I just got more excited!
I need an update and soon!