|Reviews for Dinner and Dessert|
| Me chapter 4 . 7/23/2012
Great Story...Great Lemon Cake... and a wonderful writer! :3
| Nara Merald chapter 4 . 6/3/2012
Great fic- I love the angst Sousuke and Kaname would realistically face. I also love the happy ending!
| animelover931 chapter 4 . 5/28/2012
Plz continue this was sweet and touching story that was romantic plz update!
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
So sweet! Great ending, great way to show the character development. I like the Sousuke-Kurz interaction and how you delicately but clearly show Sousuke's typical teenage struggles...in his unique and atypical Sousuke way. Beautiful writing, great fic. Thank you and congrats to a job well done!
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 3 . 12/7/2011
Lemon cake awesome. You do a good job of leaving just enough to the imagination, and I love the way you handle flashbacks. It seems so natural and seamless. Of course, I love the Sousuke-Kaname fluff. There's not enough good SxK fiction out there, and yours is one of the good ones! Love it!
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 2 . 12/7/2011
LOVE THIS! Kaname saying, "This is so unromantic!" I could hear her voice in my head. In the many "first time" stories here at , there's a fine line between the tacky and outrageous and the too-perfect-to-be-true. Your story is a perfect balance of fluff and believability. My favorite line is Sousuke saying, "And when you cry...I hate myself." I'd love it if he said that to me...
| Tairi Soraryu chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Great start! You do a good job characterizing everyone. I love the conversation between Sousuke and Melissa - two of my favorite FMP characters. Great writing, cute story, can't wait for the rest.
| xsachi chapter 4 . 9/10/2011
I read this a long time ago and I just came across it again! Thanks so much for not deleting the story or your profile like so many other people do!
| Pchan712 chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
| Madork Gunna chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Very funny so far. Minor detail: the letters of the standard NATO alphabet for that password you're using would be alpha zulu zulu foxtrot mike papa one.
| Miztical-Dragon chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
lol this story is so cute. Don't know why I didn't find it sooner! Justice has been served for these two! Please keep up the great work!
| achaiah chapter 4 . 12/30/2009
one of my favorite citrusy-lemoned fanfics! loved it!
| timelucked chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I love this story...and i went onto Deviantart...i saw this comic called Dinner and Desserts...i thought it sounded familiar and when i read into it...it was pretty funny
| Willow-Bee the Cat chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
This is really very good. And I'll admit, I like the plot.
| Crimson Tranquility chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
Hi! I remember reading this fic a long time ago when I still didn't have an account here. It was one of my favorite fanfics ever and now I revisited it and say the same; it is one of my favorites!
I loved how you made Sousuke really think about his role as a soldier and a human being, how they are two different things and how Kaname wants him no matter what.
Also, absolutely love Kalinin's ending lines about good men and soldiers.
Again, LOVED it!