|Reviews for Promises to Keep|
| Kamikashi chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Brilliant work. I have to agree with Dream of Zen though, being more descriptive of Auron's struggle down Gagazet would only enhance the reading experience. (Also adding that last verse from Frost's "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Eveningnice reference btwwould be all too fitting.)
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
| DreamOfZen chapter 1 . 3/23/2018
This is what I imagine a solid one-shot is supposed to be like. (I'm new to the world of fan fiction.) I really liked the pacing, and the use of flashbacks and italic quotes between descriptions of Auron's physical struggle. The language reflects Auron's typical to-the-point speech. I felt his loyalty, conviction, and determination.
The only constructive criticism I can offer is that some more physical description would help us to visually see his suffering and struggle. Describe his clothes, the fresh wound on his face, the blood in the snow. The weight of his sword. The way it is written, it feels as though the reader is Auron - that it is told through his eyes, even though it is in third person.
| kiro-sveta chapter 1 . 3/5/2018
This is beautiful.