|Reviews for Human Croquet|
| guiltilyinnocent chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
You caught the characters brilliantly, if the Heathers was a book I think it would have been written in the same style.
| MydniteShadow1996 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
That was amazing!
| ParamoreLovesJoshayley chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
THATS WAS AMAZING
| dangerousdame chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
I also wished they'd toasted marshmellows (which may say more about me then the movie!) Well done.
| megan summers chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
i've read alot of Heather's fan fiction in my time, and your take on the stip croquet game was one i havn't seen before. When i read the introduction to your piece i had a feeling i would like your take on J.D. and Veronica's relationship in this scene, seeing as both of us would have loved to see them roasting marshmellows over a burning Westerburg at the end. Your descriptions are well detailed and they make it easy to imagine the situation in the movie. I hope to read more of your work!
| Partial Anaesthesia chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
Cute. It was very visual, I like that in a story, everything was so easy to picture. Very in character, very true to the world of the piece. Well done.
| DoloresLolitaHaze chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Ohh! I liked this.. Both characters were VERY in character. Great job!
| GlassSplinter chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
great job! wonderful idea, puttng in a missing scene, especially that one. _
| Blythe Flynn chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Great job...it's one of the best parts in the movie when they first have sex...this is exactly how I viewed the movie and you wrote it exquisitely...well done. Check out some of my work sometime if you get the chance.
| Tallow chapter 1 . 7/2/2004
I loved it.
| tropicalfrost86 chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
not your best
| elvenangel chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
I just saw Heathers the other day and now I am totally obssessed with it! I was hoping to find some fanfiction for it. I think the strip crouqet was my favorite scene (mostly because of how hot Christian Slater is in it *drool*). This made it so much more. Now I'm off to read more! Thanks for great read.
| SilentBanshee chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
Very nice! You've done an excellent job on capturing the essence of these two characters. The dialogue and the thoughts all sounded very true to character. Great job.
| bbgrl chapter 1 . 10/29/2003
you did a wonderful job of capturing the thoughts of veronica and capturing the attraction between these two writer of "Heathers" would be proud. I've gotta motor... keep up the good work! :0)
| cherryeco5 chapter 1 . 8/13/2003