The story is well-written, my compliments on that. It's a good blend of the two universes. I would like to point out, however, that the story contains some consistent grammatical errors. You should especially review the rules for English plurals: 's is NEVER used for plurals, with nouns, it indicates the genitive form, indicating possession. Plurals are formed by adding a simple "s" without an apostrophe (horses) or if the noun ends in S, CH, SH, X or Z: "es" (so yeah, you should use "horcruxes")

it was an amazing story that i have never been so proud to finish. i am giving u a 20/10. and anyone that know me in the fanfiction world knows that i am very stingy with my praises but this is one of the if not the best fanfiction crossover i have ever read and i would love a part 2. plsssssss

sometimes i get confused if it's pjo percy or hp percy-

I’m honestly baffled as to why people keep writing Percy like this. Y’all keep changing Percy into this take no shit badass who keeps doing shit to assert his dominance. That crack of thunder was bullshit as well seeing how he has no way of creating lighting.

Really good all the way till the end when you mind wiped everyone. You would literally need to mind wipe every single person who ever saw the ICW or percy jackson and even then, they swear on magic and they get screwed over because of something they'll never remember doing. You continuously go throughout the story saying oh were a small group we can't do alot right now, only to then mind wipe literally 25% or more of the population. Hard to take this story with any grains of salt when they can do that.

Great story! Loved how it worked out, played with the facts in the cannon to turn it into a new sequence of events, it takes so much talent to do thatI gotta confess tho, I was totally thinking there would be a twist at the end that Harry was a demigod somehow (Percy got an off feeling from him, he survived the killing curse, Percy not being able to summon his sword from him in the dreamscape etc) revealed by Lou figuring out he was a demigod and they could just fire an Avada at him and call it a day, or in the epilogue the mist wouldn’t work or something... but honestly, it’s still great the way it is, and I can keep a head canon that Harry was a demigod and they were all just oblivious

Thank you. I loved the story and what you did with Percy enough that I binged read it from midnight to 4am. I'm super excited to see more of this character.

I'm a little – a lot actually – sad that no one will ever remember Percy's involvement, but mostly I'm sad he destroyed his relationship with Harry. I'm not sure what they were exactly, but I believe Harry already considered Percy his only family with Sirius. I believe, despite the lie at the end, he trusted Percy more than anyone in the world. And that Percy just so casually erased all of that, it causes me endless amount of heartbreak.

It was a marvelous story. You put incredible amount of work in all the investigation process, the politic shitstorm, the schemes and manipulations, etc. It was extremely – perhaps even frighteningly – realistic and for that you have my praise.

Thank you for writing and freely sharing this story with us.

Yep, to be honest I had expected how the dream walking thing would end as soon as I started this chapter. It came to me abruptly that it would be much more poetic if the one to end Tom were to be Harry and not Percy. I just wasn't sure how exactly he would kill him.

As for the last scene with the strike team, I totally agree that the americans would mix muggle weapons and magic. They might not miggle with no-majs, but I'm sure they'd take inspiration from them.

Oh, we're nearing the end. Still, speaking of Nico, I'm kinda sad you never involve him. He's my OTP with Percy. I'm not saying you should necessarily pair him with Percy if you don't like that, but maybe have him as a best friend or partner. Anyway, you better don't kill Percy trying to save Harry, not that I think you will.

I'm glad it wasn't Sirius, but I'm also sad it was Dempsey. I liked the guy. But well, we knew it would happen.

Though I'm surprised Voldemort let the ring in the shack if he knew there would be an assault. Putting Death Eaters but not removing the ring in the unlikely case they lost was a bad move, which is weird for a paranoid wraith like him.

Harry certainly isn't idle. But honestly, I think that if Harry had just said to the goblins they had an horcrux in their vaults, they would hasten to get ride of it due to how evil and wrong that magic is.

The aurors and members of the Order must have been suitably impressed and terrified of Percy's power. I never refuse a little badassness from times to times.

Oh! Things are getting interesting.

I'm eager for the coup. First... Umbridge!