Really amazing chapter.
It's always nicde to get an update to (IMO) the best KP story around.
Loved the internal conflict, the lines of thought and the discussions.
The twists and mysteries are well done, as is the comedy.
I can't wait for more.

I hope I helped with constructive criticism.
Over and out

PS: Post this on AO3 ASAP, we never know when ff net might just decide to 'get rid' of your story forever randomly. The comment/feedback system is also better there, it really allows for a deeper relationship between readers and the authors and the readers themselves. Also keep a backup of it on your drive.

Dude it’s reward, not reword

Grammar could definitely use some work dude

I am so happy to be able to read this again! It's been awhile, so I have some trouble remembering everything that's happened, so I'm gonna reread this again! It's definitely worth it! You deal with all your real life issues, you come first dude. Focus on the stories second. Healthy, happy you, means better chances for more awesome stories. I'm a patient dude. I can wait some months or even years between updates if that's what you need. Just know your readers appreciate you, and are happy to see you back!

Ha I new that mrs doctor P new that kim was in love with Ron and now all the girls know as well

Good luck on your mission agent stoppable

Can't say I recall the last time I reviewed this story. Months or years? This wasn't an eventful chapter but looks like part of a setup that may not finish next chapter. Not much to go aside from James being creepy. Until next time.

good chapter thanks for the read glad to see you get back to this story

why are they fighting over ron, i thought they all were his secret girlfriends or something? are they fighting over the position of head wife or something?

So Will Du finally shows up

It's great to see you up and at it again. I'm hoping that things get better for you in the long run, you seem like a cool person. Reading your stories is always a treat. Unfortunately, some of the stories here degraded in quality (not saying which).

Bonnie talking to Tara about the whole Yori situation and "IF" Kim finds out about all of it... even the suspense is a riveting experience.

James making moves when the lady's saying "no"? Now that's something worth a read, hoping the "busty blonde" we know keeps away from this stuff. She's too smart for that.

Director might have something up her sleeve, our eyes are on her eyes (or eye if we're being "accurate").

It has been awhile sense you updated this one, good to have you back!

I think that Ann and Ron need to talk things out, he still does not know about James cheating on her, and I think its time he needs the full picture.

Come on kim just break up with josh already lol

So glad you’re back

ah, it is SO good to see you again... sorry I haven't been able to chat or help you out like I used, to, I want to talk more, I miss our sessions. I'm certain I can come up with some stuff to help you out ;)

Haha just finished re-reading this. The one thing I have to say, i don't what your plans are, but I hope Kim is part of the little Harem.