| Reviews for Don't tell |
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   LxZero chapter 56 . 8/20/2023 I'm so glad for the updates...thanks for the work! keep them coming plz! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/23/2023 Bonnie you are no ways a friend of Tara’s . You made Ron assault her |
| Fredward1 chapter 1 . 5/23/2023 This is dumb as hell. You made a high schooler who’s been doing halo jumps, climbing mountains, running constantly for like 5 years into a scrawny kid first of all. Doesn’t make sense. Second of all, you didn’t need to post your degradation kink for everyone to see. We get it. You like being dominated by women. I can’t see a turnaround for this story at all. First the illogical Ron being skinny with the amount of food he eats, how active he is, how often he gets into situations that require him to physically move in any way. He shouldn’t be skinny. That’s just unrealistic. Also I and probably countless others aren’t into seeing the mc be some bitch’s bitch and yet somehow this is gonna turn into a harem but it sounds more like he’s just a toy. It sounds dumb. |
| Nysk chapter 40 . 4/8/2023 Loving the story, but here are a few corrections. What now genies I think should be What now genius. Any sing for anger should be any sign of anger. Even disappeared to should be disappear too. where you disappear to should be disappeared too Kept repainting should be kept repeating Mentally shocks – mentally shakes Device she secret for – searched for See a pillow was – a pillow where There some muffled words – there were some muffled words Always locked – always looked Coterback – quarterback Change to a scroll – changed to a scowl Rivel – rival Shocked her head – shook her head Vage? – Vague? Thanks for writing and I hope you take my corrections in the spirit they are meant to be, as helpful." |
| Archangel Uzumaki chapter 40 . 4/8/2023 Your spelling takes a nosedive at the weirdest moments Coterback, scroll, using the word secret for the word reached, but then right after that it goes back to being a top notch story. Should really get yourself a beta to proofread for you or if you have one drop their ass and get a better one lol cause they’re obviously not doing their job |
| Nysk chapter 21 . 4/6/2023 Is this story fact or just a possibility? Hurm... |
| Chet chapter 8 . 3/14/2023 Man, ron should have taken that picture from monique that would have seriously put an end to all of Bonie's schemes |
| Chet chapter 7 . 3/14/2023 Woah, Ron's seriously scoring in life. |
| Chet chapter 1 . 3/13/2023 Aww man poor ron. |
| ShadowLord1329 chapter 2 . 3/14/2023 What we have here ladies and gentlemen is a plan that backfired. Now Tara will think Ron finds her sexually Attractive. Now she plans on stealing Ron from Kim |
| Guest chapter 55 . 1/25/2023 hope you update this story |
| Wabbayack22 chapter 19 . 1/15/2023 What? The fuck? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2022 this is DOA too I assume. you took on too much and burned yourself out... |
| BlackEmperorDragon chapter 55 . 10/23/2022 i hope you keep writing this . its so good and you really keeps you thinking about what will happen next |
| Kartoffelsalat9 chapter 1 . 10/13/2022 i need to know how this story goes on. im way too invested |