bioaccumulation

please come back

What a good chapter, when will the next chapter come out?

Good for its duration, to be sure. I think there were some railroaded things plot wise, but nothing was boring and I do think that at least the Fate characters were in-character as they could be.

I wish there was more, but I'm glad it didn't end in an unsatisfying betrayal.

The "current plan" mentioned in the A/N sounds retarded. I know this story is dead, but in this case it might have been for the better. Pretty much everything so far has been entertaining, if requiring of much suspension of disbelief. If the entire story kept this odd noble-grim tone, it would probably be really fun. But rehashing Mordred and some of the same dumb shit that made Daenerys' character dumb in the later seasons of thow sounds like a surefire way to make a story's ending suck.

I'll definitely at least read what's out, though.

Saber is amazing.

Well this was a fun read. Dragon Saber is adorable!

Viserys reminds me of Shinji hahaha

hey would you consider updating this story and a "Snow and Ashes", because i really like these stories as well as "A Wandering Sword Hero"
i hope you consider
have a nice day

I didn’t know anything about GoT when I went to read this the first time, but now I’m loving it!
Hope you continue :)

While waiting for updates to Invincible Saint I've been reading your earlier stories and just had to say thank you, they're all amazing.

I'm baffled at some of the numbers you are throwing around. There are a few things that I don't think match up with what I know as Canon.

1} The Starks are 8000 years old. That isn't just how long they've been kings but how long they've been around. And that starts from Bran the Builder.

2) The first accounts off steel would probably be the Andals, but it might not have been until the Valyrians. Before the Andal Invasion the North used Bronze - this is known. Theon the Hungry Wolf moved them up to either iron or steel number stealing the Andal secrets (I've never bothered to clarify that one) and this happened after the Wall making adventure care family 8000 years old. So steel wasn't discovered 12000 years ago in this verse.

3) I think you are assigning a greater understanding of social structure and humanitarian progress to these people than they deserve. The stagnation of Westeros is a debated topic, but it is a fact that they have stagnated. And the North probably isn't fond of outsiders because they've been trying to maintain their culture for millennia in the face of the Andals (who aren't exactly pictures of peace and love themselves)

4) Considering it was known that there were tribes of cannibals beyond the wall, then yes they ABSOLUTELY wanted to keep them out. They don't have the Internet to spread ideas. They don't even have a newspaper. And even if they did, most people can't read.

5) People like walls because they help keep out people wanting to cause trouble and pay the Iron Price for other people's things. So yeah, maybe that is what inspired Trump - oops, pulling back from politics myself ;)

(See what I did there? XD)

Truly enjoying your story even with what I pointed out here. I always find dialogue to be something that sets apart really good writers, and you are good at it in my opinion. Well done.

This was an enjoyable read. I do hope you come back to it at some point.

Love this!

A really good story, hope you decide to continue it someday.