Reviews for Ordinary Day
yanxxx chapter 4 . 12/24/2015
Oooh James sister! I want to braid her hair and be her friend. I'm glad Lily gets to do that!
I loved this story! I got a sense of how their relationship before and I was excited to read how that developed into a romantic relationship. Even though it was like done in a day, I still found it plausible and very sweet.

Thank you for writing this! I very much enjoyed reading it.
yanxxx chapter 3 . 12/24/2015
Lily's Dad is perceptive. And so so right.
I'm glad they got to talk for a bit. I think Lily needed that talk.

I like how smoothly this is going for James and Lily. They're usually loud and bold. This is more quiet and pleasant... but still fun!
yanxxx chapter 2 . 12/24/2015
Easily drunk James is adorable.
Sweet salad-giving James is sweet.

*dreamy sigh*
yanxxx chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
It's been a long long time since I've read HP and only the first book but I think this is giving me those HP feels since I think this style is very Harry Potter. I really like this so far! :)
kit7714 chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
Great story, great writing! Enjoyed all of it a lot. Thanks :)
Ninja23 chapter 4 . 3/19/2008
I loved this story!
rika chapter 4 . 6/6/2007
pshaw this is good stuff. so random, but good. update? chyeah... err :D yeah.
Eve1980 chapter 4 . 10/22/2006
THAT STORY WAS REALLY REALLY GREAT! LOVED IT!
Arista Ramabra chapter 4 . 10/7/2006
aw it was really cute and quite realistic ]

~Arista
salsybob chapter 4 . 6/3/2006
my god that was a fast moving relationship ;p lol...lovely story- fun too which is always a bonus! i would love to be there when james meets up with the other marauders- that would definitely make for an interesting scene! ; )
rexbandit chapter 4 . 12/10/2005
i liked this story a lot. :) showed a very sweet side to both james and lily and how they're so perfect for each other. :) i thought they were very in-character and well written. :) very nice, keep it up.
Lady Farevay chapter 4 . 6/6/2005
Very lovely luv. I loved the length and the characterization. Very realistic, sort of, what with the first date and boyfriend thing being only in a few hours though but still, it was realistic and I loved that.

The story line was great though I found the ending slightly anti-climactic, even though it held significant meaning to the story and title, which I recognise, I felt a bit disapointed.

Still, I'm sticking this in my faves (If I have room...) and telling you how wonderfull you wrote it. It was great, wonderfull even and I implore you to keep dishing out even lovlier things!

Well done luv,

Lady F
Blackheart09 chapter 4 . 6/1/2005
yay! great chapter! can't wait till the next chapter! lol lata

~Hypa
rohan chapter 4 . 3/20/2005
WOW? Very good Story!

I usually don't review but that story deserved one. It was very good!

Thank you for writing it
snazzysnez chapter 4 . 1/30/2005
this fic has been lots of fun to read- u r a great writer! we love lily n james! well done- now im gonna see if uve written any more stories lol! x
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