Reviews for The Optimised Wish Project |
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Ziggrrauglurr chapter 48 . 5/13 Thank you. This is pure art. |
Some randombot chapter 2 . 3/20 Decent story so far minor complaint but Goku not being able to ride the nimbus? Even if he is smarter does him not being pure of heart change a huge part of his character and with how Important the nimbus was to him throughout OG db as of rn imma just assume that he’ll be able to ride it later |
Primus2021 chapter 1 . 3/15 Power Pole, Extend! |
implacablemente789 chapter 48 . 2/22 The best theory of Fanfiction I've ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope don't make us wait too much. This potential can't be wasted. I really don't have a clue on how you are going to defeat Freezer. Toriyama could only do that with magic superpower coming from NOWHERE. But you are a scientist, I respect that. Good explanation, good points. Can't wait for see the results. |
Red's Melancholy chapter 9 . 2/2 Ahh so this is why the whole rational mind plot device was abandoned from the get go. Forced plot development. |
Red's Melancholy chapter 5 . 2/2 For such a supposedly rational fic, theres always so many irrational actions taken by Goku. The rational mind says if i have the strength to protect myself from further harm or protect my friends, do it. So after multiple attempts on his and Bulmas life, why is Mai still alive? |
Vini666 chapter 44 . 1/10 In this second reading I remembered that people who die from natural causes cannot be resurrected by dragon balls. The old lady will remain dead, while her nephew will come back to life. |
Vini666 chapter 16 . 1/9 I'm rereading the story, I hadn't noticed the stone with M like Magin. |
hudin chapter 1 . 12/22/2023 I loved the latest update, to be honest, I didn't think it would end that way, but I loved how King Piccolo's story concluded, the question remains: Did Kami also die? The truth is, if there are no Dragon Balls on Earth, the Namekian planet arc could unfold. Bulma is already very aware of Freezer's existence and might start considering the idea of Bills' existence. On the other hand, the data collected from Namek by Piccolo will set the groundwork for improving the E-II chips. What worries me the most is how Bulma will cope with the Senkai system revelation. Will she push Goku's body to its limits to enhance its resilience? Will there be a Time Skip? From what I read, Milk (Chi-Chi) doesn't feel attracted to Goku; on the contrary, it's towards Krillin. Will Goku have that revelation of feelings for Bulma, or will he remain a stoic loner? Furthermore, this Goku isn't seeking to confront stronger beings, making it easier for him to master Ultra Instinct. There are many uncertainties; this universe you've created is fascinating from every angle. |
Guest chapter 48 . 12/18/2023 Wow, that finale was so good. |
The Rocha chapter 48 . 11/25/2023 Just finished reading this. Thought it wasn't going to be much, but boy was I super surprised. This fight was simply epic. I love how tricky Bulma here is. Now I wonder if the capsule is acting more like an artificial Mafuba. Talking about it, I just realized the way you described how the Capsules work seems very similar to the Mafuba, except the Mafuba doesn't stop time. I am curious about how powerful Piccolo is. I did some napkin math and there's no way Piccolo is any weaker than at least 700 PL. Hell, I suspect he's strong as Raditz at least. I noticed he never tried or had to spawn his children. Is that why he's stronger? |
Assassin Sylar chapter 48 . 11/24/2023 guest do not compare the saiyans with king piccolo they have very different power levels and there was more than one saiyan |
cherrypicker-001 chapter 48 . 11/17/2023 ahaaa tbe entire time i was thinking 'its gonna be a real shock whne they find out no deahofom ballls' |
Parselmaster chapter 48 . 11/17/2023 Wow. Wonder if clinically dead is enough for the soul to move on (ending the dragon balls), or if it's effectively in limbo until time resumes in the capsule. |
jdboss2 chapter 48 . 11/16/2023 I was really really happy to see this updated I am so pleased you are actually making technology militarily useful I honestly have got into the mindset like probably most Dragon Ball fans that the time you get to Demon King human weapons can do no damage or even an enemy I'm really really pleased to see Balmer actually making use of her namesake Caps I really really was thinking no way they were going to squash him in a Caps first time I read Bouma shut the door on him but I really appreciated burning alive to wakening first The whole time in the fight all I could think was please now powerful fighter turn up at the end steal the victory and defeat a tired green monster I'm so pleased the victory was solely months with a great cost and sacrifice as realistically in the Dragon Ball timeline I don't see them doing better Demon King 300 power level Raddatz 1100 I think the Prince 18k giant monkey transformation 180K? |