Reviews for The Optimised Wish Project
Navarone2013 chapter 39 . 4/18/2021
Nice chapter. Piccolo is both scary and not at the same time, it's weird, but being ruled completely by anger and lacking reason makes you both unpredictable and predictable. Not sure how to describe it. Good job!
Assassin Sylar chapter 39 . 4/18/2021
Great chapter your story is great
Spades231 chapter 39 . 4/18/2021
You’re doing a great job depicting King Piccolo. It was a fun chapter, well written, maintaining the high level of quality you’ve established. Great work.
LucasTheWhale chapter 39 . 4/18/2021
Really liked the chapter! Very curious how they will stop Piccolo.
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 39 . 4/18/2021
I'm loving the story
thewittywhy chapter 39 . 4/18/2021
Okay, so first off I love the most realistic tone. King Piccolo is a monster, and you show his disregard for human life very well. Him being out of the loop on technology makes sense when I think about it. Now the situation look incredibly hopeless. But still, they have Goku. I can't get over how you're fleshing out this world so much!
Bob-Just-Bob chapter 9 . 4/18/2021
Loved the first 8 chapters, hate the 9th. So much that I can't read more.
N1cok chapter 39 . 4/18/2021
Great Chapter. Looking forward to more.
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 38 . 4/6/2021
Great chapter. The war stuff dragged on a little for me. But I'm enjoying the story. Following
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 35 . 4/6/2021
I loved the cat and mouse chase. Was nice go see Tao die with Honour
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 27 . 4/5/2021
Bulma has placed her decoys it seems!

I'm guessing baba is held hostage
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 25 . 4/5/2021
Bulmas plight reminds me of another db story named the long road
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 16 . 4/4/2021
That was one hell of a ride I laughed so hard at the poor cow and this segment ..

"Yamcha from the sex scandal that involved the daughter of..."
"I have to go now. My companions need me."

Brilliant. Some nice Majin foreshadowing there.

Puar was an excellent villain! Reminded me if the thing movie
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 15 . 4/4/2021
This just turned inti a HORROR story what a twist. Ultron vibes
Thomas-The-TMC chapter 14 . 4/4/2021
I got vector calculus flash backs with "the curl of the gradient is always zero"
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