Reviews for Harry The HufflePuff 4 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So there's Larry, but if the bit of Voldie that was in the jar is the same bit in the story that went back to Albania, how did Barty and Peter get to this point... and where's Sirius? All still curious what kind of correspondence Harry had with Bones to get her to show up. I good dramatization of Harry liking girls but still being too immature to appreciate an individual girl who is also one of his friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had to laugh. Good build up on teenage boy stuff. He also wasn't the one to make the model, just make it bigger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that Harry's having correspondence from crazy dog father who is both having fun and getting some revenge. I like that Harry continues to talk with Susan and Hermione when needed, even if he forgets to hang out with Luna in the summer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was missing Larry . . . thanks for finding him |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great ending. There were so many fun ideas in this story that I don’t know which was my favourite although I did enjoy the first task and Harry’s solution. I am really interested in the progression of Larry and how he is changing. Thank you for sharing your ideas and writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, good ol Larry. The question is, will they come after Harry as he was a bit of a neglectful father, forgetting about him after the basilisk thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great installment. The literal cop-out on the second task was a bit of a let down, however very much in character. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And that was a surprise ending. Not sure I like the lazy Harry, joke that it is. I don't think he'd like the work a girlfriend would take, nor that of a wife and family. Holding down a job would be too much work, and his ideas are not something that would allow him comfort as an adult. Well, I guess grifters either do well, or they fade away, eh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohhh that is NOT good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a super cool maneuver with the Boggart! I wonder if it joined Lockhart in low Earth orbit? Great chapter, too. Aiee, Larry! I don't think anybody on the DE side was counting on *him*. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang Larry’s getting creepier it’s starting to look like he’s going to be the final boss |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the best end for wormtail, love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it could be giant people or giant horse cock, on one side they let you ride on them no matter your gender and on the other side they will wreck you and tall big lady is nothing more to say. Even Harry is lazy saying suspicious that he has to say 'sus'. Definitely an "Among us" easter egg. |