Reviews for A Private Dance
raven haired girl chapter 19 . 11/3
now Ana is being a bitch ...he suffered enough already he has realised his mistake c'mon
Guest chapter 21 . 8/7
Great story! Thank you. You’re an amazing write:)
Ayina11 chapter 11 . 6/6
Okay. I found the contract negotiation is really hilarious. This chapter is as refreshing as the first chapter.
Ayina11 chapter 1 . 6/6
Okay... Chapter one already finish reading. And I really hooked with the storyline. Ana in here is funny and has more confident than the original book. And I LOVE it. You make me laugh all the way. Will continue to read the next chapter. Thank you
Guest chapter 21 . 6/3
Imo ana doesn’t deserve him breaking him to the point she did u can’t go into a relationship hoping to change someone if u can’t accept them as they are then u have no rights trying to change them to ure specification. She knew what he was like got his hopes up just to
devastate him she was beyond cruel an didn’t deserve her HEA
kushka chapter 21 . 5/28
Great story
Stine chapter 21 . 4/23
I loved your story
Betty73 chapter 1 . 4/16
I'm totally in love with this story! Enjoying it over the long Easter weekend in the sunshine- bliss!Thank-you for sharing your awesome writing talents with us!xx
Felicia Flowers Spears chapter 20 . 4/8
second time reading and still loved every minute of this story.
bluesky5678 chapter 21 . 8/29/2021
Wonderful story. Thank you for sharing.
bluesky5678 chapter 16 . 8/28/2021
It bothers me a little that Christian wants Ana back home so they can continue to progress toward his goal of making her his submissive. It seems like he is more interested in getting his way than in wanting to be with her because he loves her even though he often expresses his affection for her.
bluesky5678 chapter 5 . 8/27/2021
Someone complained that your chapters are too long!? That is ridiculous. I don't know what to do with that. Is the reader unable to take a break? Has the reader ever read an entire book? Geez.

This is good storytelling, by the way.
Fifty Shades Girl chapter 20 . 8/14/2021
Just finished reread and it was so good as the first time!
CarolinaGrace chapter 21 . 7/16/2021
I just re-read for the umpteenth time. Such a fabulous story! Thank you
Cdarty chapter 21 . 3/9/2021
J’ai adoré votre histoire...
Continuez à écrire ..
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