Reviews for Next Up: Puberty
Karmi Ky chapter 1 . 3/10/2020
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
lol a peeved tifa hissing saying while dragging her cowardly chocobo head idiot by his ear i asked you to talk with denzel about puberty and all you can say is no problem now we and by we i mean you is going to talk to denzel about puberty with me watching you do it or you can forget about playing let's hide your penis in my pussy later tonight
theClosetPoet7 chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
Ooooh man. Denebola Leo recommended this and my is this cute! “Good talk.” Great job!
derek chapter 1 . 6/7/2019
lol cloud on his knees begging saying to tifa I will do anything for you than have to explain to denzel about puberty
Derek chapter 1 . 4/29/2019
Lol cloud to tifa it s your turn when Marlene start talking teenage boys
derek chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
lol socks that s new normally someone uses a tissue ore toilet paper after playing with themselves
cerulean1990 chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
That was hilarious xD
Alcantis chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
OMG, this is cute! Cloud doing the daddy talk! More! Haha
Too Lazy tologin chapter 1 . 3/15/2018
Haha Cloud's awkwardness really made my day!

Nicely written as always :)

Sango44 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
Lol this was cute and funny.
DesiringPirates chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
This was so funny! it's nice to see Cloud deal with something so normal and embarassing. And hmmm? I heard a hint of a sequel? XD I'm happy with anything you share. You quickly turned into one of my favorite authors!
Denebola Leo chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
This was a good chuckle. Cloud is just adorable when he doesn't quite know what to do or say, then goes face first into it in his unique style.

Plus family stuff doesn't get enough fanfics dedicated to it.
Chris Atola chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
Yeah, and what about the rest of it, Cloud? I feel bad for everyone involved.

Thanks for sharing!